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Pack, Peck, Or Pike Hexsonnetta

I had a house for sale They asked me to hold it Right before I sold it But my house was a whale That already set sail And didn’t give a whit But it thought what the heck Coz it altered its tack So I sold it to Pack But forgot about Peck Who was up on the deck Which was on my whale’s back But those guys I dislike So I sold it to Pike For the HexSonnetta contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 9/21/2015 2:16:00 AM
Wonderful write David n yet another win! Big congrats!
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Date: 9/19/2015 5:03:00 PM
David, yours was a humorous one. If it had been with the correct meter, for sure it would have placed much higher!! Congrats in my contest.
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Date: 9/19/2015 4:28:00 PM
David, congrats on your HM win. SKAT
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Date: 8/30/2015 1:35:00 PM
Ha ha, another fun one!
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Date: 8/19/2015 7:34:00 PM
Very creative.. I like it but have never written in tat form myself. Good luck in that contest. A7
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