David Fisher Poet Sonnet

Pack, Peck, Or Pike Hexsonnetta

I had a house for sale
They asked me to hold it
Right before I sold it
But my house was a whale
That already set sail
And didn’t give a whit

But it thought what the heck
Coz it altered its tack
So I sold it to Pack
But forgot about Peck
Who was up on the deck
Which was on my whale’s back

But those guys I dislike
So I sold it to Pike

For the HexSonnetta contest

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Dr. Upma A. Sharma September 21, 2015 at 2:16 AM Wonderful write David n yet another win! Big congrats!

Andrea Dietrich September 19, 2015 at 5:03 PM David, yours was a humorous one. If it had been with the correct meter, for sure it would have placed much higher!! Congrats in my contest.

Skat A September 19, 2015 at 4:28 PM David, congrats on your HM win. SKAT

Richard Lamoureux August 30, 2015 at 1:35 PM Ha ha, another fun one!

Robert Lindley August 19, 2015 at 7:34 PM Very creative.. I like it but have never written in tat form myself. Good luck in that contest. A7