Pacing

pacing the halls in the middle of the night a deathly silence AP: Honorable Mention 2020 Posted on October 9, 2018

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Harry Horsman

Date: 10/9/2018 4:50:00 PM

Reminds me of an asylum, Line, eerie i know that feeling.

Line Gauthier
Date: 10/9/2018 6:58:00 PM

Indeed, Harry. Thanks for your visit and comment.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/9/2018 3:26:00 PM

Foreboding and sad, Line. Wish I could see more of your poetry right now, but my life these days is a bit of a soap opera with me but a minor character in it and it's making me unable to be here as much as I would like to.

Line Gauthier
Date: 10/9/2018 6:59:00 PM

Thanks for your visit and comment, Andrea.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 10/9/2018 12:04:00 PM

There is nothing that feels more lonely.

Line Gauthier
Date: 10/9/2018 3:09:00 PM

Indeed. Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Caren.

Chris Green

Date: 10/9/2018 10:54:00 AM

Sad, very sad. I can't say that I know this feeling but I do understand it and can imagine how it must feel. Nicely expressed sorrow

Line Gauthier
Date: 10/9/2018 11:26:00 AM

We all have our crosses to bear. One day here, next day there.

Rhona Mcferran

Date: 10/9/2018 10:47:00 AM

Suspenseful senryu... this has an eerie feel to it- like anything could happen... (or maybe it's just my overactive imagination kicking in!). Good one, Line!

Line Gauthier
Date: 10/9/2018 11:25:00 AM

No, Rhona. You got the right vibe. Line xx