Pacific Street / Brooklyn, New York 1953

Pacific Street
 Brooklyn New York 1953

Mud-red clay bricks, hot and worn;
brown-stone blocks carved tenements formed.
Concrete sidewalks slit and cracked
where children skipped a hopscotch tack.

Hear the smack of bats to ball 
of palm to rubber against towering walls;
Of jump ropes whooshing through the air
of giggling girls with bouncing hair.

Smell the pretzels salt and sweet,
the chicken soup and borsht to eat.
Bubba’s breast, the rose perfume;
seet cigarette smoke in dark hall rooms.

Taste the vanilla ice cream cone 
with chocolate shell that 
Dad’s brought home.
The hot red fire ball, candy treats
the egg cream soda down the street.

Do whop Ditty songsters
 in August’s heat.

Bubba’s calling from window peaks.
And Tanta’s rocking babies sweet.
Brooklyn, Brooklyn in the street.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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George   Avatar
December 18, 2009 at 5:37 PM
Thank you for participating in my contest, Deb and congratulations on your win. You took me on a journey to Pacific Street and the image is still lingering in my mind. Love, Lainie
Sheart Avatar
December 18, 2009 at 8:06 AM
Deborah, Congrats on your win in Elaine's contest "Tell Me A Story", so very well deserved! Love Light Patty
Richards Avatar
December 17, 2009 at 6:32 PM
Makes me see this street as if I am there! In the heart of Brooklyn, ....like watching a movie! Excellent job, Deborah...and well deserving a win in this contest! Congrats! Luv Carrie
Kurth Avatar
December 17, 2009 at 2:06 PM
Great descriptions! I could see and smell the street! Congratulations on your placement in Elaine's contest. Krista
Devonshire Avatar
December 17, 2009 at 1:45 PM
Awesome descriptions that transport the reader to Pacific streat, with all its sights, sounds, aromas and diversity. Congratulations on your success in Elaine's contest, Deborah! Love and holiday blessings, Carolyn
Higgins Avatar
December 21, 2008 at 4:49 PM
This is so wonderful. I know Pacific street and Atlantic avenue. This is great because as I read I could see the place..thanks for the journey back on this great piece.
Jordan Avatar
December 21, 2008 at 4:38 PM
Excellent rhyme and flow in this one Deborah - Merry Christmas & God Bless, MJ
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