Oxfords Schleusen/ Oxford's Locks/ Las Presas De Oxford

Oxfords alteSchleusen
Das Gurgeln des Wassers am Abend
Sonst nur noch Stille

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Old locks of Oxford
Gurgling of water at sundown
Otherwise only silence

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Presas antiguas de Oxford
El gorgoteo del agua en la noche 
Por lo demás sólo silencio

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 7/12/2010 9:14:00 AM
Just beautiful, as always ~ Sharon :)
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Date: 7/10/2010 2:10:00 PM
a peaceful view and sight, enjoyed Gert. A wonderful poem love the surrounding of nothing bothering the view,. have a nice one,..p.d.
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Date: 7/9/2010 7:50:00 PM
Beautiful image, Gert. I like the way the sounds of the water stop at sundown. There is always peace to be found in the night. The second line sounds even more lovely in German. Thank you for this delightful haiku! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 7/9/2010 12:26:00 PM
They say the water that's silence always runs deep. I like the essence of knowledge embedded in this haiku. The unraveling of which would be enlightening to many. Great job! Joseph
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Date: 7/9/2010 6:36:00 AM
Hi Gert, I am going to try to start commenting again. I have just been too weepy these past three months…commenting became difficult. I do enjoy reading your wonderful poetry, though. (Love the many languages!) Thanks for understanding. God be with you and keep up the excellent writing. Lovingly, Dane Ann
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Date: 7/8/2010 6:57:00 AM
i could feel the surroundings. Nice write
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Date: 7/7/2010 4:46:00 PM
Hi Gert--you have some unique poetry and I do enjoy it. Thank you for your comments. My computer time has been at a premium of late so am missing lots. Thsnkd sgsin gor your very encouraging comments. God bless you. -Robert
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Date: 7/7/2010 1:50:00 PM
Vivid description Gert.. and I do apologize for writing u as a 'she' in my Vacation Photos poem.. Andrea corrected me .. how wonderful to know u are a wonderful male poet.. this is quite awesome too... and I WILL need your help with my Italian .. we are leaving August 14th for two weeks there.. so have a month to brush up on some language pointers with u if u don't mind my friend.. with luv from the "Sweetheart"..
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Date: 7/7/2010 11:39:00 AM
Stunning as always, Gert!
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Date: 7/7/2010 9:49:00 AM
Interesting thoughts that you have penned..Sara
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