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Owl Haiku

Eyes glow light of night Cream color wings majestic Prey killed for a meal. WRITTEN FOR OWL HAIKU CONTEST 10/15/2021 SPONSOR ROBERT JAMES LIGUORI

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Joe Maverick
Date: 10/18/2021 11:19:00 AM
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Very descriptive within its lines Karen The truth of life. No softly softly in reality Unless it's that of the owls gliding in air Or the feathers it preens Before that meal is gleaned.'
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Karen Jones
Date: 10/18/2021 12:34:00 PM
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That is so beautiful Joe! Just love your way with words.
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David Kavanagh
Date: 10/17/2021 3:41:00 AM
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Perhaps praying for a meal Karen, no going home with empty talons, wonderful imagery, cheers David
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Karen Jones
Date: 10/17/2021 6:37:00 AM
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Thanks David.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 10/16/2021 8:06:00 PM
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Ah, yes! The peaceful state of nature -- shattered by reality. Love that turn in the third line. ~ Birds defy words, Gershon
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Karen Jones
Date: 10/17/2021 1:26:00 AM
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I am still working on my haiku skills. Thanks!
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Jan Allison
Date: 10/16/2021 4:53:00 PM
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guess its all down to survival of the fittest, hugs Jan xx
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Karen Jones
Date: 10/16/2021 4:56:00 PM
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Lol. Well poor thing has to eat. Thanks for stopping by Jan.
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 10/15/2021 11:31:00 PM
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That first line is so compelling, lovely metaphor-
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Karen Jones
Date: 10/15/2021 11:38:00 PM
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That is so exciting that you think so, Michelle...thanks.
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Victor Buhagiar
Date: 10/15/2021 11:00:00 PM
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Sad but it must survive.
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Karen Jones
Date: 10/15/2021 11:02:00 PM
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Yes. I am glad I do not have to hunt to survive.
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Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 10/15/2021 5:11:00 PM
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Very poignant Haiku....a winner. Paulette
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Karen Jones
Date: 10/15/2021 5:16:00 PM
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A nice compliment thank you but competition is steep. lol

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