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Overwhelming Tranquility Blissful Peace

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Strange that we start a poem, with a specific theme, and we end up with something entirely different.

Sometimes We have hall had such pleasurable idle days Where everything becomes still and quiet That surrounds us Apart from the pleasant melodic delightful Audible sounds and sonett I of twittering warbling fidgety birds that calm me Perched upon high Somewhere within the summer frock-adorned majestic rugged Towering trees Forever stretching twisting and contorting upwards Towards the life-giving golden orb In the expansive canopy of sky All of which put me at ease And release the tension Welcoming tepid waves of soothing Warm calm leaves me in complete ecstasy So light and relaxed we drift off with no care Let go to float upon deep cooling tranquil seas As the radiant sun smiles down Pushing and peeping through The most beautiful ultra-vibrant blue My skin gently caressed by a teasing tickling breeze Awakens my sensitive receptive skin As I leave the harsh din and problems of a mad world far behind Obtrusive thoughts fade and quickly Evaporate into nothingness And carry on my carless destination I give and purposely surrender My whole being to the will of the idle moment Free and at peace and at one with myself and the creation That abounds in technicolour and surrounds me I have no needs at this time nor desire Other than to enjoy and relish the moment Leaving me fulfilled and replenished Warm cosy and content In the wonderful Here and Now And if I should release my grip on life And be consumed by the stark dark stillness of death To rest and be at last at peace If departing be as heavenly as this I would not tremble nor fear That fatal ominous kiss But wholeheartedly Face and embrace it For it is only the beginning And not the end The real-life has yet to come In a much better place than this Where I'll see lost loved ones and friends Who visits me in dreams Who will smile once again In a beautiful peaceful land At the end of the rainbow. Peter Dome©2024.

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