Bryn Strudwick Poet Limerick

Overweight Santa

OVERWEIGHT SANTA

Father Christmas had been overfed
And could barely fit onto the sled.
When he reached the first flue,
Far too fat to squeeze through,
He made Rudolph go down it instead

27th November 2022
A Funny Christmas Or December Holiday Limerick Contest
Sponsor - Tania Kitchin

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Kim Rodrigues December 8, 2022 at 4:38 AM Rudolph is his dupe! Congratulations, Bryn!

Andrea Dietrich December 4, 2022 at 2:33 PM that was really cute. Love it. and congrats

Linda Alice Fowler December 4, 2022 at 7:08 AM Poor Rudolf. Nose dive? Cute one Bryn. Congratulations on your win! :)

Susan Ashley December 3, 2022 at 5:00 PM Lol! Such a fun limerick, Bryn. Wonderful imagery! Congratulations for your excellent win in Tania’s contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Tania Kitchin December 3, 2022 at 3:29 PM Bryn, congratulations on your winning placement, a cute one!

L Milton Hankins November 27, 2022 at 8:26 AM Wow, that's some fat Santa!