Overseas Visitor

I sat alone by the sea
when a snail waved to me.
She politely asked “Is this seat free?”
“Why yes,” I said, “ certainly.”

“I've traveled forth all lifelong
seeking somewhere to belong.
I've sought wide and sought long
for a place to sing my song."

We sat a while companionably
and watched the waves absently.
When I again glanced amicably,
her abandoned shell lay silently.

Holding her empty shell to my ear.
I heard her message most sincere
Sounds of the sea resounded clear –
"Thanks to you, I sing my song here!"
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Peck Avatar
April 19, 2023 at 10:22 AM
Oh, Linda! I love your sweet story! Congratulations on your big win!
Fowler Avatar
April 19, 2023 at 2:27 PM
Hi Ann. I'm glad you enjoyed this little whimsy :) Thank you! :)
Kauffman Avatar
April 18, 2023 at 12:30 PM
Linda, what a magical story! This left me with a heartfelt aaah! Wonderfully creative for children of all ages!!! Congratulations on your win! Blessings!!
Fowler Avatar
April 18, 2023 at 1:55 PM
Hi dear Sam. Thank you for your encouraging and supportive words! A fun write for me. :)
Roper Avatar
April 17, 2023 at 12:43 PM
Such a beautiful verse, you made me be the one sitting on the sand picking up his shell. Congratulations on your win very well deserved
Fowler Avatar
April 17, 2023 at 1:51 PM
You are very kind Eve. Thank you for reading and commenting! :)
Rose  Avatar
April 17, 2023 at 2:00 AM
ah, this is so so precious, what an amazing visitor this was. You get an A for a top notch idea, Congrats my friend !
Fowler Avatar
April 17, 2023 at 6:14 AM
Hello my dear Vie. Thank you for your supportive words! :) Linda Alice
Volumes Avatar
April 16, 2023 at 2:46 PM
Congrats on the win Linda. A brilliant poem, true to the familiar Linda Alice Fowler style. Superb poetry, that leaves you with a smile.
Fowler Avatar
April 16, 2023 at 4:01 PM
You flatter me Wen. :) Thank you for the supportive words and congrats! :)
Ward Avatar
April 16, 2023 at 1:11 PM
Pure whimsy - well done for your win, Linda.
Fowler Avatar
April 16, 2023 at 1:37 PM
Thank you Julia. I appreciate this placement and your contests. :)
Maverick Avatar
April 11, 2023 at 10:23 PM
Ahh the day a song came to have its say., Hey.' Did it build slowly.? To a crescendo Though, did you get 'shell-shock?' Do you Even know.? Also did this visitor leave an Address.? I am thinking she soumds like A source..Should that be sauce.? Herrrm Never mind..' For a song; or songs of course.' P P D is going to come, next year this month If ? I we all get going some.! B t w I plead Rhyme control (I was casting no aspersions) on You..As you did quite a good show.' Linda-Alice, and good on ya.!
Fowler Avatar
April 12, 2023 at 6:33 AM
Thank you for the fun poem Joe. No aspersion on my version? Better snide than suicide, eh? ;) LOL Yes, PPD will come again next year - wistful to think it will come every month, or week, or day. Thanks for coming by my friend. :) Linda Alice
Daniel Avatar
April 10, 2023 at 5:02 AM
Sweet:)
Fowler Avatar
April 10, 2023 at 6:21 AM
Thank you Jo. :)
Turner Avatar
April 9, 2023 at 2:24 PM
Such a creative and fun write, Alice. Now we know!
Fowler Avatar
April 9, 2023 at 5:02 PM
:)) Thanks Daniel!
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