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Overlooked Beauty

I hear him rambling on about the way he makes a mess 
the way he eats his tomatoes then leaves with no confess 
the flowers have been bent in his garden's sanctuary 
he's a little creature wild yes he's very quite contrary 
He's always climbing fences coming round the gate 
still, curiosity is trump and he loves him without hate 

Watching from a window he's waits for the drill   
he's a little furry squirrel he comes and goes at will   
then one day I look from the outer patio door 
Aldo is in a lawn chair reading softly with adore 
There upon his foot two little beady eyes of sweet
watching him intently how nice they finally meet

Over morning breakfast he tells me he is smug 
as I butter bread and fill the coffee mug  
There's a glitter in his eye that says he ain't  so shy    
he really loves the little pug but I can't tell you why 
every time I see a trace of peels atop our fence, 
I smile a little smile and win in self defence..

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 11/12/2018 4:04:00 PM
Hi Pixie, what Gershon says is true, we do miss out on so much. This is a wonderful write, a canvas of joy that sings within my mind. Reads like a winner Pixie. have a wonderful Tuesday. Hugs....Mike. XX
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Date: 11/12/2018 8:21:00 AM
Yes, so often overlooked. We miss out on so much of these fascinating creatures' lives. G.L. in the contest! Best wishes, gw
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Date: 11/11/2018 7:28:00 AM
They are indeed playful and beautiful..well done portrait of this everyday beauty we miss..best for a win, Pixie.
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