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Written on July 27, 2023

Updated with addition of haiku and monoku on November 19, 2023

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This love, more than a feeling, it’s twinkling Like the purple blue on a mountain’s hue Or lightest rain, trembling with truth, sprinkling My heart with gentle dreams, yearnings ensue This laughter, more pleasing than morning dew Singing hope to the heart who’s dissuaded Restoring wonder with such a breakthrough Through love this awesome, joy is persuaded This light, brilliant as the sunrise in June Pours out peace, hope and grace throughout this life Because my soul is restored, I’m immune To the darkness of night, worry and strife Due to the love you give so caringly We shall live grateful and unerringly love, laughter, light shift, urging souls to grasp - wealth comes from giving, blessing! love, laughter and light silence the darkest of nights

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Date: 1/6/2024 2:35:00 PM
Awesome as always.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest
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Date: 1/2/2024 8:44:00 AM
Regina, this is a gem. Love the whole poem, but the haiku and monoku really put the icing on the cake. Lovely write, dear friend. Congratulations on your top win! Happy New Year! Love, Charlie
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Date: 7/29/2023 3:29:00 AM
Much joy in reading your lovely poem Gina. Congratulations on your winning entry.
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Date: 7/29/2023 1:33:00 AM
"This light, brilliant as the sunrise in June Pours out peace, hope and grace throughout this life" - Great work as usual. Congratulations!
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Date: 7/28/2023 6:31:00 PM
You can feel the joy in your poem, Gina! Congrats on your 1st place win! Blessings, Kim M
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Date: 7/28/2023 2:15:00 AM
A good message within a beautiful write, Gina. Well done.
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Date: 7/27/2023 7:21:00 PM
God called his creation good and gave Adam the task of working and caring for the earth. It is a beautiful earth. "Overjoyed" is just that, Gina you have overjoyed with a Sonnet just as lovely and peaceful. I'm faving it too. Love~Anaya
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Date: 7/27/2023 1:43:00 AM
Gina, this is amazing, going into my faves rightaway:)
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