Overcoming the Self

OVER COMING THE SELF

In the time it takes to crack a smile I had made up my mind .
To live my life , my way , my style and to leave yours behind

In the time it take a tear to fall you had fallen behind 
because the slightest move echo's for miles , inside a suspicious mind

so take all the concerns on your brow, now match them with mine
gather all those broken pieces and go follow that sign

because I wont live in your fear's reflections , I just wont hold that line
you're yesterday , you are not tomorrow and as for today I decline

In the time it takes to close my eyes , the deed is done , 
in the name of liberation , I will follow the sun

I am the flame I'm the transition , I seek , I find 
that perfect style of inner smile , to unbind my mind
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011


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Date: 1/23/2024 6:18:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 1/27/2016 10:48:00 PM
shane, enjoyed reading your poem, Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. XOX -- LINDA --
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Date: 9/9/2015 2:31:00 PM
Shane, thank you for sharing. A pleasure to read... SKAT
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Date: 11/26/2011 12:10:00 AM
Welcome to poetry soup. Shane its a nice poem from ur side. Thanks for sharing with we people.I realy like this poem especially the expression use in last two lines.
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Date: 11/16/2011 5:48:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you today Shane. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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Date: 11/14/2011 6:56:00 AM
Beautiful expressions , the last two lines, shane
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Date: 11/12/2011 8:32:00 PM
Shane, very sweet of inner self..... Enjoyed your poem~ Thank you for sharing. Have yourself a wonderful night.. Take care ;-) ..LINDA
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Date: 11/12/2011 8:40:00 AM
An imaginative write for a sticky situation.
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