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Over The Years

Quote "Over the years we have soared hand in hand" by port We clutch many years of married life many times it was hard to hold on many times good but many times bad and sad Weaving our lives just like the vines outside our window all holding on until the end never quitting never giving up I clasp my words I do not want to inhale the anger I only want to grasp the love The red hued roses from our day just a dream these many years later the color still make me gasp from their beauty Now much older we can soar we can glide through the final years the final years in peace and love Date Written: 6/29/21021 Note: July 4 is our anniversary   4 Place Poetry Contest Deadline Sponsored by: Constance La France

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Date: 7/16/2021 1:19:00 PM
Lovely write Paula, Congrats on your win..
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/16/2021 1:26:00 PM
Thank You, for writing and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have a win. Glad you like this one. Have a blessed day....................
Date: 7/16/2021 12:01:00 PM
Paula, congratulations on your placement in my Writing Prompt - Grasp - Challenge! Good use of the required words ~ love and serenity _Constance
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/16/2021 1:26:00 PM
Thank You, for writing and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have a win in your contest. Thanks for doing it. Glad you like this write. Have a blessed day....................
Date: 7/2/2021 9:47:00 AM
Truly a poetic piece, Paula, Best wishes,,, Pangie xxx
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/2/2021 10:49:00 AM
Thank You, for writing. Glad you like this write. Have a blessed day..............
Date: 6/30/2021 10:04:00 AM
Preset words and free verse too- you gifted us such a magnificent poem. Truly a most enjoyable read today. A fav-- a gem... God bless...
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/2/2021 10:48:00 AM
Thank You, for writing and for your kind words. Wow!!! a fav-gem??? You made my day. Glad you like this one." Have a blessed day..............
Date: 6/30/2021 6:20:00 AM
Thank God...for weathering the Storm...Life is not easy...You just told it.
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/30/2021 8:30:00 AM
Thank You, for writing. Glad you like this write. So true, "life is not easy." Have a blessed day..............
Date: 6/29/2021 2:53:00 PM
Awesome work Paula, you did a great job with the preset words, and the theme was very realistic. Good luck in the contest
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/30/2021 8:29:00 AM
Thank You, for writing, for your kind words and for your good luck. Glad you like this one. Have a blessed day..............