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Poetic Form: Alliteration
Inspired: 2024 May 22
Audio: Meet Me Half Way by Kenny Loggins

 

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Sun up you're up time's up get up light on paste on brush up brush down brush all around chin up shave up wash up wipe up you're out kids up mom's not suit up tie on press down the thumb go-round then down back up flip down to pull knot-up turn-round looks-round grin up aplomb all done drive on downtown park up lockdown press up look-round liked sound work bound all-round onto a room, found pot a brewed on two drop up on top the cup a brewed a tongue go-round fresh ground abound go all around or down more down but not the ground looks-round clock found heads down aground looks-round, and found, holds-up brewed cup time's up fun's done work bound must run had fun all done kids off yes Hon what's up we've a meeting at ten--not again, I said, no Xbox--thought 'twas for me ... oh is it any wonder?
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Narain Avatar
May 23, 2024 at 10:42 AM
A nice poem on daily rituals and love for Xbox games.
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
May 23, 2024 at 8:53 PM
I'd forgotten, forgive me, as my blog has riddled its way into my day--boys 1st and older, girls after and younger, Xbox finds a way, Aloha, Jay.
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