Over the Last Hill

It's best not to leave this old fellow unsupervised Not responsible for his actions, could be extremely unwise No telling where it might lead Check the sofa, might've peed This old fart can no longer be helped it's really fruitless to try
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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January 7, 2018 at 7:39 AM
Just don't wander outside !!!!!
Ellison Avatar
January 7, 2018 at 7:50 AM
Just gonna stay curled up on the sofa mumbling to myself! Please check in every once in a while okay!!! xxx
One Avatar
January 6, 2018 at 9:50 AM
Nice one Jack...
Ellison Avatar
January 7, 2018 at 7:20 AM
Merci beaucoup!!!
Flats Avatar
January 6, 2018 at 8:25 AM
Jack's a teacher of many things//such as how to pee and how to have flings//and, irresponsibility 101//can be lots of fun//mostly for old ding-a-lings. CLIMB ON JACKSON!!!
Ellison Avatar
January 7, 2018 at 7:19 AM
Stay tuned... I'll show you the way! Methinks you're possibly one of em old ding-a-lings!!! GOOD MORNING JOHN JOHN!!!
Pigeon Tart Avatar
January 6, 2018 at 7:47 AM
Giggles, can't be helped but can certainly be enjoyed :) xomo!
Ellison Avatar
January 7, 2018 at 7:15 AM
Happy to oblige my my dear Mo!!! xxx
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