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Over the Horizon

Over the Horizon

Tailing behind, waves
 undulate in rhythm 
with plunging of oars,
  spraying clouds of
 mist in mischief.
              
 On murky shallow
 shores, beaming
buds candescent 
in pink, sway merrily,
 illumining valleys 
eclipsed by grief.


Contest River line(earlier submission)
Unrhymed six lines
Syllables 8,8,8,8,10,10 
Date March 2 2017

Now submitted for ANY POEM WRITTEN IN MARCH 2017
DATE. April 5 2017

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 4/6/2017 3:51:00 PM
Such raw depth, I love it...thank you and congrats. ..
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Sushma A. Singh
Date: 4/6/2017 8:30:00 PM
Thank you, Laura!
Date: 3/29/2017 8:35:00 AM
Congrats Sushma, for your placement with this fine piece!! ;-)
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Sushma A. Singh
Date: 3/30/2017 7:55:00 AM
Thank you!
Date: 3/19/2017 2:01:00 PM
Delicious, Sushma! : )
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Sushma A. Singh
Date: 3/20/2017 4:17:00 AM
Thanks!
Date: 3/19/2017 8:09:00 AM
Well done Sushma, congratulations...
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Sushma A. Singh
Date: 3/20/2017 4:17:00 AM
Thanks!
Date: 3/18/2017 5:34:00 PM
Lovely imagery Sushma.
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Sushma A. Singh
Date: 3/20/2017 4:18:00 AM
Thanks!

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