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One in Five Contest Sponsored by Joesph May
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Over calm seas the sun does rise Far away and seeming so small Truth is where our perspective lies Over calm seas One of the largest of them all; Sea creature with bandits disguise The sun balancing like a ball So deceived by fallible eyes This whale makes the sun rise and fall Painting red, orange, yellow skies Over calm seas

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Date: 7/7/2025 5:41:00 PM
A gorgeous poem. Back with congrats, Crystol.
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Date: 7/7/2025 5:31:00 PM
A pleasing read, nice to imagine a whale painting with a ball, and nicest of all - calm seas!
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Date: 7/7/2025 12:00:00 PM
Nicely penned, Congrats on your win
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Date: 6/26/2025 9:34:00 PM
This is so smoothly done. I really like the sound of it. Great job. And thanks for what you said about Butter Love.
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Crystol Woods
Date: 6/27/2025 8:14:00 AM
Thanks and your welcome! Xo
Date: 6/26/2025 8:27:00 PM
Crystol, your roundel is lovely, with appealing descriptions. Janice
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Crystol Woods
Date: 6/27/2025 8:14:00 AM
Thank you! Xo
Date: 6/25/2025 2:26:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful "Over Calm Seas" write. I love calm seas with the blue water. "Good Luck" We both did this contest. Have a wonderful/blessed day writing away.............
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Crystol Woods
Date: 6/26/2025 5:18:00 PM
Ty! You too! Xo <3

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