Over and Over

A tip of the cap and I'm undone sparks flourish beneath the brim and seductively lie   a view enhanced enriched in the recesses of her eye   shadows dance and dart pulling at my heart silently I'm split apart   mouths water and I'm doused   with an overcoming fainted feelings falling out   'breaths eased at peace   minds grip and grasp curvaceous corners grazed entrails hazed (over)   and over and over again I come undone
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Dietrich Avatar
June 2, 2018 at 8:25 PM
It's so nice seeing you back here. You always have such fine imagery. Love the last three lines!!
Sands Avatar
June 1, 2018 at 2:19 PM
Well written Tim! :)
Turner Avatar
June 1, 2018 at 11:03 AM
Nothing like a beautiful woman! Have a great weekend Tim. I hope you have some water nearby. It's gonna be a hot one!
Lane Avatar
June 1, 2018 at 9:49 AM
Such subtle hints of sensuality in playing out the scene from flirtatiousness to the final act, Tim. Encore?
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