Over 70 Springs

What are you saying?
Oh! You are a mad at all!
Can sweet dreams yet,
Don't call me an old!
I have just over 70 springs.

What do you want to know?
Oh! You aren't a good observer!
Can sing yet like as my first time,
Don't call me an old!
I have just over 70 springs.

Do you want to kill me?
Oh! I won't die time to time!
Can do all that has grown,
Don't call me an old!
I have just over 70 springs.

Are you normal as like me?
Oh! Don't judge a book by it's cover!
Can touch the moon, six for six in a over
Don't call me an old!
I have just over 70 springs.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Deb Avatar
June 13, 2017 at 11:25 PM
It's ok Dean wood. Thank you very much for your comment on my poem. Usually People judge like the poem!!
Wood Avatar
June 13, 2017 at 5:23 PM
I can't say that I fully understand this but it is well written.
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