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this is the taste of defeat the white sands wash over your feet the sun rises, glares.. then sinks the days have ended i succumb to thee the loss of love a love that scarred a touch that burnt is now a defeat Cheers!

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Date: 2/15/2016 7:08:00 PM
NINA, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 2/15/2016 7:07:00 PM
NINA
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Date: 12/2/2015 11:18:00 PM
NINA, thank you for sharing.... Luv SKAT
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Date: 3/11/2012 2:13:00 PM
NIce write here Nina good job !
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Date: 2/25/2012 3:06:00 PM
Nina this is very nice, soft, glancing and most indiscreet !
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Date: 2/25/2012 2:53:00 PM
Sweet and lovely poem Nina! - oxox love Anne-Lise
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Date: 2/25/2012 2:53:00 PM
Deep heartfelt write my poet friend. I like this a lot. Michael.
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