Over

this is the taste of defeat
the white sands wash over
your feet
the sun rises, glares..
then sinks
the days have ended
i succumb to thee
the loss of love
a love that scarred
a touch that burnt
is now a defeat
Cheers!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Agustin Avatar
July 3, 2024 at 3:09 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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February 15, 2016 at 7:08 PM
NINA, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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February 15, 2016 at 7:07 PM
NINA
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December 2, 2015 at 11:18 PM
NINA, thank you for sharing.... Luv SKAT
Kriticos Avatar
March 11, 2012 at 2:13 PM
NIce write here Nina good job !
Fox Avatar
February 25, 2012 at 3:06 PM
Nina this is very nice, soft, glancing and most indiscreet !
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February 25, 2012 at 2:53 PM
Deep heartfelt write my poet friend. I like this a lot. Michael.
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February 25, 2012 at 2:53 PM
Sweet and lovely poem Nina! - oxox love Anne-Lise
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