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Outwited Masters

. The wild wind’s whisper haz touched the budding roses giving them life The gawp from the writer before the readers yep wuz jaw dropping Yep I’ve seen other roses budding yet these which were before me yep tumid and were an umber sought by many uh poets Yet I yep I have outwitted the masters *Les clins d'oeil de poete

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Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 2/16/2015 10:29:00 AM

Very nice pen James! Another wonderful piece it flows nicely. I enjoyed it my dear friend.A 7 from me! I wish you a very wonderful day! In his light! God bless you! :) D.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/10/2015 6:02:00 PM

thanks for your sweet friendship message to me today, James. As for this poem, I think it is beautiful!

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 2/7/2015 4:32:00 AM

beautifully penned james excellent pen

Emile Pinet

Date: 2/5/2015 11:31:00 AM

Your words are so gentle, like silk they're smooth to the touch, yet so strong that they support the soul. Emile.

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 2/4/2015 10:17:00 PM

ahhh French? hmmm ;) ;) I will send you one of mine from the France trip, can't post it or I can't sell it keep it tight to your chest. Light & love