James Peranteau Poet Free verse

Outwited Masters

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       The wild wind’s whisper haz
        touched the budding roses
                giving them life

        The gawp from the writer
             before the readers
                       yep
              wuz jaw dropping

                        Yep 
          I’ve seen other roses 
                     budding
   yet these which were before me
                       yep
                      tumid
             and were an umber
         sought by many uh poets

                        Yet
                          I
                        yep
                          I
                have outwitted 
                  the masters




*Les clins d'oeil de poete

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Dorian Petersen Potter February 16, 2015 at 10:29 AM Very nice pen James! Another wonderful piece it flows nicely. I enjoyed it my dear friend.A 7 from me! I wish you a very wonderful day! In his light! God bless you! :) D.

Andrea Dietrich February 10, 2015 at 6:02 PM thanks for your sweet friendship message to me today, James. As for this poem, I think it is beautiful!

Liam Mcdaid February 7, 2015 at 4:32 AM beautifully penned james excellent pen

Emile Pinet February 5, 2015 at 11:31 AM Your words are so gentle, like silk they're smooth to the touch, yet so strong that they support the soul. Emile.

Debbie Guzzi February 4, 2015 at 10:17 PM ahhh French? hmmm ;) ;) I will send you one of mine from the France trip, can't post it or I can't sell it keep it tight to your chest. Light & love