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Outward Bound

OUTWARD BOUND marry and set course with me where we will, wed and we will share one boat: our rudder will be love. ………………………………………………………………….. KIMO for Dr. Ram’s contest “Wedding is one of the Special Events in Marriage”

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Date: 3/22/2011 9:59:00 AM
Good luck in the contest..Reads like a winner to me...Sara
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Date: 3/21/2011 3:43:00 PM
Leave it to you, to do something unique, and so original !! Love it!
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Date: 3/21/2011 3:32:00 PM
i love the kimo feel to it, like haiku. Great final line!!
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Date: 3/21/2011 2:06:00 PM
Beautiful write.. a winner my friend
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Date: 3/21/2011 1:32:00 PM
Indeed, it's love that steers a relationship, hopefully into peaceful waters. You know I love the sea, Syd, and this analogy really appeals to me. Best wishes in Dr. Ram's contest. Love, Carolyn
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