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Outsiders With Flaws

Each of us is worthwhile but also biased. We spotted risks that ignited and fussed. Still, I've been conscious of my longing for you. The fulsome size of impulses blocks the view. I'm pondering while sitting on the stairway. When will you learn, my heart was torn away? I was smitten by everything you foresee. The same as mine, your defect engrossed me. We were crude, murky, and haphazard people. The whimsy of joyous was shared by all. Unfeigned "hello" and "how are you" was shared. But I sought bettor from you because; I cared. As my jeans fade, so does my spirit bleed. Nobody else is quite as you, bridge mead. My choices were reflected in my corpus. I stumble and wobble during the pre-chorus. I cut my finger when I spry coiled my hair. My pulse spiked at the whim of a landslide dare.
Written: September 20, 2022
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Baker Avatar
September 23, 2022 at 3:39 PM
The forming of relationships can be so stimulating and the emotions can be a rollercoaster ride. The mind wonders and fills us with different ideals or possibilities. Falling in love for a short time is more envigorating than love itself it seems. I enjoyed your thoughts and your poem of love, Lasaad. Bill
Shariff Avatar
September 22, 2022 at 2:29 PM
Superb rhyming love poem. You have used your ingenuity and crafted this poem very well. All the best!
Tor Avatar
September 21, 2022 at 6:59 AM
Searching for love is manifested in your sharing of words Lasaad. Well done my friend. Heartfelt piece this is...
George Avatar
September 21, 2022 at 5:12 AM
The internal longing for closeness and intimacy are beautifully expressed in your own inimitable way !
Pandit Avatar
September 21, 2022 at 5:03 AM
I hear the longing in this reflective poem, Lasaad. Well done my friend.
Horsman Avatar
September 21, 2022 at 1:57 AM
'The fulsome size of impulses. Just one of so many wonderful lines in this, a truly heartfelt poem. Harry.
Poet Avatar
September 21, 2022 at 3:17 AM
Your thoughtful comments made a positive impression on my heart, and I want to express my gratitude to you, Harry. Be blessed
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