Outside Time and Space

Heat always flows from hot bodies to cold
If the universe were infinitely old
But the universe does not conform
Or it would be in uniform
It isn't therefore it is not 

The start of creation with an anthropic rule
Fine tuned nature & design overwhelming
An interaction of basic forces quite astounding

Incredible interdependencies delicately balanced
As we explore mathematically what we can
It seems the universe is uniquely designed  for man

So choose this day whom will you serve
The Evolutionary theory which is absurd
Or GOD The Almighty Creator

Ask yourself...
Evolutionary formula or intelligent design?
Do you believe it to be a chemical quagmire
Or a brilliant design from a power much higher?

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Date: 8/31/2025 11:22:00 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 1/28/2016 11:09:00 AM
Michael,, A great pleasure to find and read your poem today. Love ** SKAT **
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Date: 7/29/2015 6:44:00 PM
While I appreciate your attempt to make poetry from your religious belief in "creationism" and I support your right to voice your beliefs, my own are not coincident with yours....nevertheless, I encourage you to continue to write and to make poems that celebrate all "creation" and all thought processes and the huge diversity of the universe and all it contains.
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Date: 7/30/2015 4:53:00 AM
I think you actually missed the point on this poem as its actually based on scientific fact not my religious belief , though I have my belief in it , its more scientifically factual than speculative . I suggest reading the paper called beyond time & space.
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