Outside the Bounds of Sister Cecilia

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OUTSIDE THE BOUNDS OF SISTER CECILIA

the best firecracker 
otherworldly seven hues
hiss, cackle, kaboom

Yes, dear ones, I want to own a pen that produces perfect penmanship, the curlicue calligraphy that Sister Cecilia would have hated. Each color, as my mood dictates would jettison from my mind to paper as a musical note, with hieroglyphic fervor. In unity and uniqueness as my lyrical words ignite each heart…each pen imparts the idea that never ends, heart to heart, light and dark, dear poet.

breathless, eternal
wax that never defuses
its bittersweet light

I can hardly stop to cross the t’s and dot the i’s. You, dear loves, like stars grab on - you little prince(s)! You travel light with faeries and dragons light as silk and mighty as giants. We muse together through the galaxy and time. In Athens, we sit down a moment to hear Saint Paul say, “For in him we live and move and have our being. As some of your own poets have said, ‘We are his offspring.’”

      baptism of seeds
in the only plot we know —
        glorious setting
   inner poet can’t contain
as we head out of the grave

Sincerely, as we begin our journey, it never ends — it goes on and on with friends. Sparks fly - serious, silly, frolicking, frenetic and holy.

   let not ruler scowl -
      repeat curlicues fifty
times to accomplish your dreams

11/30/2021
Haibun- With A Message
Sponsor: Charles Messina

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Date: 12/21/2021 8:37:00 PM
A blessed piece, several pieces in reality, indeed. I enjoyed them all. Congratulations, Kim, on you marvelous talent with words, with artwork. I praise God for having met you at PS.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/22/2021 9:30:00 PM
Thank you so much, Reason! Thankful for you too!
Date: 12/18/2021 7:59:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A "Wonderful" story/write. Love It. Have a blessed Christmas and 2022.......................
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/18/2021 8:34:00 AM
Thank you, Paula! Merry Christmas and Happy New Year!
Date: 12/17/2021 5:36:00 AM
"Sparks fly - serious, silly, frolicking, frenetic and holy" - Beautiful haibun with great haikus. Congratulations!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/17/2021 5:56:00 AM
Thank you, Christuraj! :)
Date: 12/5/2021 3:12:00 AM
This poem certainly will catch the attention of believers and in particular Catholics, and with the mention of Athens and St. Paul even the Greek Orthodox faith as Paul features strongly selling his leather goods in the markets of Athens and around Athens, leather sandals horse bridles and much more whilst converting the non-believers. Excellent poem dear friend. I loved it, brought back a section of the work I had to study. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/17/2021 5:56:00 AM
I love that it brought back memories for you! Thank you, Jennifer! :)
Date: 12/1/2021 1:27:00 PM
This is lovely Kim. Beautifully and reverently penned. Love it. God Bless, JB
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/17/2021 5:55:00 AM
Thank you so much, Judy :)
Date: 12/1/2021 7:38:00 AM
There is, without a doubt, a message here, and it is a powerful one. An awe-inspiring poem, Kim, best wishes with the contest.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/1/2021 10:44:00 AM
Thank you so much, dear friend!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/1/2021 10:37:00 AM
Thank you so much, dear friend!
Date: 12/1/2021 1:24:00 AM
I searched for Sister Cecilia and found she was a Catholic Saint. Love your Haibun with its haikus. Hugs
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/1/2021 5:00:00 AM
Thank you, Victor! Have a wonderful day.
Date: 11/30/2021 9:20:00 PM
I love the poem and the photos; this went to my FAVE list Kim. I love everything about both!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/1/2021 5:01:00 AM
Thank you so much, Caren! :)
Date: 11/30/2021 6:54:00 PM
OK, with that Hebrew scroll pictured, I'd like to chime in. What you've photographed is a part of a page from the Scroll of Esther, aka Megillas Esther, which is read on the Jewish Holiday of Purim. The part that you've captured has Queen Esther asking the Jewish populace of Shushan (Persia), the capital then, to fast for her for three days straight! For she was going to ask the King to spare her people from the murderous plot of his right-hand man, Haman. How about that?! To Life! ~ gw
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/30/2021 8:00:00 PM
Thank you so much for telling me that!! To life!
Date: 11/30/2021 2:47:00 PM
Certainly does contain a message and a strong one too. Awesome poetry, love the form and the penwomanship.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/30/2021 3:36:00 PM
Thank you, sweet friend!
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