Outside Presley's Birthplace

Often greatness comes from humble roots
Where none-expected talents lay hidden
Beneath veneers of undeveloped yearning,
Hiding like gemstones in hard rough slate
Until the master discovers facets that glisten.

written January 1, 2020
[while visiting the birthplace of
Elvis Presley in Tupelo, Mississippi]

Entered "Bite Size Poetry No. 32" Poetry Contest
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Krutsinger Avatar
January 13, 2022 at 8:28 AM
This could be verse or free verse; extremely well done Hank. Bravo!
Hankins Avatar
January 13, 2022 at 8:41 AM
Thanks, Caren. I didn't know quite how to classify it. It is non-rhyming, but flows like a fine verse.
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