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Outside Jesus Town

Outside Jesus Town Old man dusted off his hat and whiskers Polished off a tumbler of red wine Continued baking in the California sun Outside the town of Jesus, just east of it, before the mines There to finish his raw sculpture of a sandy rusted man Bent over, sitting on a worn out stool The desert followed the old artist It is everywhere He blended in with it Black hat and shirt were not the best apparel for the heat of day They are the only clothes the old man owns He scavenges the dried out lands for metals Rusted iron is the best to build the sculpted figure A monument to life out there on prairies Where heat and art and wine take part in nature And pull it all together from the dark The white bearded man with tumble weeded hair Stands contemplative just east of Jesus Planning his next rusted man But blinded by the noon day sun Created on 12/05/14 for- East Jesus – Poetry Contest

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Date: 1/3/2015 6:02:00 AM
Congrats on the the win with this fine take on the theme, Earl
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Date: 1/3/2015 8:06:00 AM
Good morning Dr. Mehta, Thank you. I enjoyed your poem as well. Congratulations to you too on your excellent win. Earl
Date: 1/3/2015 12:11:00 AM
gosh another one of my favorites on the winner list down here lower!! congrats. I think you developed the theme VErY well.
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Date: 1/3/2015 5:40:00 AM
Hi Andrea, Thank you so much. Yes, and the desert dust down here still taste a little metallic and the sun is blistering hot but we get by. I'm always happy with any kind of win. I like it when people get to see my creations. I also always enjoy reading your works. Happy New Year! Have a great week end. Earl
Date: 1/2/2015 11:53:00 PM
Earl, Interesting topic, poem and win. CONGRATULATIONS!!! Goodnight ~LINDA~
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Date: 1/3/2015 5:20:00 AM
Hi Linda, I appreciate your comments. Thank you so much. I can still feel the blazing sun and taste of the desert dust from this one. Have a wonderful day. Earl
Date: 1/2/2015 5:09:00 PM
Hey Earl, nicely done my friend. Congrats
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Date: 1/2/2015 5:47:00 PM
Hi Mark, Thank you so much. Glad you enjoyed it. Have a great night and a Happy New year. Earl
Date: 1/2/2015 2:02:00 PM
Hi Earl, congratulations on your win with your very descriptive poem! Felt as though I was there! Sandra
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Date: 1/2/2015 4:04:00 PM
Hi Sandra, Thank you so much. I liked your winning poem also. It was very enjoyable to read. Take care. Earl
Date: 1/2/2015 12:31:00 PM
Congratulations Earl on your win with this impressive write.
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Date: 1/2/2015 4:11:00 PM
Hi Maurice, Thank you so much. Glad you liked it. Have a happy prosperous New Year. Earl
Date: 1/2/2015 11:07:00 AM
You are simply superb,congrats on the win Earl...huggs
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Date: 1/2/2015 4:15:00 PM
Hi Kayod5, I appreciate your kind words. Thank you so much. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Earl
Date: 1/2/2015 10:32:00 AM
beautifully descriptive Earl many congrats on your win:-) Hugs jan xxx
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Date: 1/2/2015 4:17:00 PM
Hi Jan, Thanks! I see you had a great win in the contest. Congratulations on your excellent poem. Earl

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