Outside

OUTSIDE

Out past tomorrow, outside of time,
There is a place where we can meet
After this war is over.
We can talk about fleshy things,
If you like, but be careful,
Science has no words for this place;
The mouth is empty, legs are useless,
Innocence and guilt have no meaning.
Then, there, will you tell the truth about love?
Why you shunned me like a lame donkey?
In this forgiving place lies leave no disgrace
So there is no reason to spare my feelings.
Nothing to you, you were my everything.
What about emotions? They have no use,
Feelings are not sacred truths.
There is no line between friends and lovers.
Abundance in the heart leads to a soul complete.
There’s a freedom on the other side,
This is a burden from which we’ll rise.
From the standpoint of eternity
The fear of dying looks like the fear of living.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Ricci Avatar
March 15, 2017 at 3:45 PM
Hello Phil. How powerful because you allow the reader to pause with such thoughts especially the last line which truly speaks and stands out. Well done and expressed.
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March 20, 2017 at 7:34 PM
Thanks Lisa I appreciate your comments.
Salih Avatar
March 13, 2017 at 2:25 AM
"Outside of time", Deep and meaningful Phil, I liked it
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March 13, 2017 at 7:32 AM
Thanks Osman for stopping by and commenting.
Teagan Avatar
March 12, 2017 at 7:08 PM
oh this is so true! I love the positive vibes of this poem...
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March 13, 2017 at 7:32 AM
Thanks Becca :)
Leachet Avatar
March 11, 2017 at 10:23 PM
This was very deep and honest. I really liked it :)
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March 12, 2017 at 9:56 AM
Thanks Tat.
Dietrich Avatar
March 10, 2017 at 7:51 PM
Phil. This is full of sincere feeling. It's sad and beautifully expressed.
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March 11, 2017 at 7:09 AM
I'm glad you liked it Andrea, thanks for commenting.
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