Russell Sivey Poet Ottava rima

Outline of a Ghost

I see tears that pour down my crying face
Reaching illusions of my life alone
I see the outline of a ghost in space
Transparent and see thru, seems to have grown
My tears just enlighten and fill with grace
It won’t go away, it’s stuck to this zone
Memories flood my senses, hurt creeps in
Ghost is my lost love, buried deep within

Russell Sivey

Just a made up poem…

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Shadow Hamilton March 2, 2014 at 7:34 PM a real little treasure Russell great pen hugs

Jack Horne March 2, 2014 at 10:23 AM glad to hear this is just made up, Russell - really love this

Nette Onclaud March 1, 2014 at 2:17 AM you struck a sensitive chord with this poignant yet radiant piece, russell.. " ghost is my new love", how visually assaulting.. awesome job!.. huggs

Kayod5 Kayode March 1, 2014 at 1:02 AM This is the poet in you Russell,you have thought beyond ordinary level,you have gone into another level where poetry dwells and the outcome of this trip to the land of wisdom is the tear in your face.A great work is this and I really enjoyed it.Happy weekend my Russell.

Seren Roberts March 1, 2014 at 12:26 AM Lovely poem, filled with emotion. Whether real or written ..Seren