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Mew
    rumbles
          inside fur
               concentrating
cat’s caboodle - the tickling of her nose
the stunning green eye and blue butterfly
                         minutia
             momentum
       of her
 breath

9/7/2020
Eve Roper’s Double Tetractys 2
Photo #3
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Date: 9/17/2020 7:44:00 PM
Hi Kim, I am back to congratulate you on your great win!!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/17/2020 8:44:00 PM
Thank you, Newton!
Date: 9/17/2020 7:08:00 PM
Lovely write, Kim.. Congrats on your wonderful win :) <3 Hugs Eve..
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/17/2020 8:46:00 PM
Thank you, Eve!
Date: 9/8/2020 5:35:00 PM
I love where you took your words for that picture!!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/8/2020 7:03:00 PM
Thank you, Andrea xx
Date: 9/7/2020 11:27:00 PM
Such and awesome poetic depiction of that great photo. Fun!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/8/2020 3:12:00 AM
Thank you so much, John! I appreciate your support.
Date: 9/7/2020 2:39:00 PM
I agree with Gershon. This piece is marvelous!! It embodies all!!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/7/2020 2:43:00 PM
Thanks so much, Newton!
Date: 9/7/2020 2:27:00 PM
This is just grand. The picture. The poem. The whole concept. Great! Katzenjammers, Gershon
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/7/2020 2:42:00 PM
Thanks so much! Katzenjammers...is that like the cat’s pajamas...blessings, my friend!
Date: 9/7/2020 9:39:00 AM
such gorgeous imagery and I love the way you formatted the poem Kim:-) hugs jan xx
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/7/2020 2:38:00 PM
Thank you, sweet friend! <3
Date: 9/7/2020 7:25:00 AM
Amazing how all that power and fleetness can become so still and focused. They are adorable, while also the world's greatest hunter.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/7/2020 7:46:00 AM
I don’t write often about cats and dogs but couldn’t pass up this sweet moment! :)
Date: 9/7/2020 7:09:00 AM
Visually stunning, Kim ~
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/7/2020 7:45:00 AM
Thank you, Line!

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