Kim Rodrigues Poet Tetractys

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Mew
    rumbles
          inside fur
               concentrating
cat’s caboodle - the tickling of her nose
the stunning green eye and blue butterfly
                         minutia
             momentum
       of her
 breath

9/7/2020
Eve Roper’s Double Tetractys 2
Photo #3
howmanysyllables.com

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Newton Ranaweera September 17, 2020 at 7:44 PM Hi Kim, I am back to congratulate you on your great win!! Kim Rodrigues September 17, 2020 at 8:44 PM Thank you, Newton!

Eve Roper September 17, 2020 at 7:08 PM Lovely write, Kim.. Congrats on your wonderful win :) <3 Hugs Eve.. Kim Rodrigues September 17, 2020 at 8:46 PM Thank you, Eve!

Andrea Dietrich September 8, 2020 at 5:35 PM I love where you took your words for that picture!! Kim Rodrigues September 8, 2020 at 7:03 PM Thank you, Andrea xx

John Watt September 7, 2020 at 11:27 PM Such and awesome poetic depiction of that great photo. Fun! Kim Rodrigues September 8, 2020 at 3:12 AM Thank you so much, John! I appreciate your support.

Newton Ranaweera September 7, 2020 at 2:39 PM I agree with Gershon. This piece is marvelous!! It embodies all!! Kim Rodrigues September 7, 2020 at 2:43 PM Thanks so much, Newton!

Gershon Wolf September 7, 2020 at 2:27 PM This is just grand. The picture. The poem. The whole concept. Great! Katzenjammers, Gershon Kim Rodrigues September 7, 2020 at 2:42 PM Thanks so much! Katzenjammers...is that like the cat’s pajamas...blessings, my friend!

Jan Allison September 7, 2020 at 9:39 AM such gorgeous imagery and I love the way you formatted the poem Kim:-) hugs jan xx Kim Rodrigues September 7, 2020 at 2:38 PM Thank you, sweet friend! <3

Joseph P. DiMino September 7, 2020 at 7:25 AM Amazing how all that power and fleetness can become so still and focused. They are adorable, while also the world's greatest hunter. Kim Rodrigues September 7, 2020 at 7:46 AM I don’t write often about cats and dogs but couldn’t pass up this sweet moment! :)

Line Gauthier September 7, 2020 at 7:09 AM Visually stunning, Kim ~ Kim Rodrigues September 7, 2020 at 7:45 AM Thank you, Line!