Outlaw

Crow Steals my Fountain pen Outlaw escapes. He won’t bring it back; Still I give chase. Lucky me, He’s dropped It.

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Michelle Faulkner

Date: 1/15/2019 1:07:00 PM

Crows are very intelligent, according to scientists who have tested it - maybe this one wanted to write a haiku!

M. L. Kiser
Date: 1/15/2019 6:04:00 PM

They are and I wouldn't be surprised if you weren't right about that. I think he liked the shiny clip and jeweled cap. Thanks again.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 1/14/2019 10:14:00 PM

Lucky for him too, if your muse is anything like mine. I like these different types you try, my friend, as you can write anything. If you could sing I could say "you can sing the phone book," like they do on the singing shows. Do you - sing I mean?

M. L. Kiser
Date: 1/15/2019 6:56:00 AM

I learned to sing in parochial school; taught by a real Nun. To this day, the song, "Immaculate Mary" echoes in my brain....the right way...(talk about leaving imprints!) Anyway, singing the phone book...let me get back to you on that one...it might be fun.

Heidi Sands

Date: 1/14/2019 5:36:00 PM

Glad to hear he dropped it. Great Ninette. Keep up the writing M.L. :)

M. L. Kiser
Date: 1/14/2019 6:01:00 PM

Thanks.