Outgrew the Broken Wings

Once there was a youthful, bubbly butterfly.
Who loved to fly under the sunlit azure sky.
        Colors of joy reflected from her iridescent wings
        as she fluttered in the breeze to dance and sing.
                Through the lush meadow full of fragrant flowers,
                looking for the sweet nectar she gyrated all over.
Cherished by all, her company, her presence.
An epitome of beauty, elegance was her essence.
        Such was her charm that nobody could ignore.
        Slowly vile gazes followed her to ruin her demure.
                Many tried to force on her their lewd advances
                but she somehow managed to escape by chances.
Soon enough she learned about the preying mantis,
the ones that cruelly victimizes others with tactics
        Never did she think her charm could be a trouble
        by turning her joyous life into a daily struggle.
                Disturbed by her vulnerable being she sat on a rose
                to drown her worries with a drink of nectar dose.
Unaware of the decoy she sipped the whole drink.
A potion mixed in it made her conscious shrink.
        Out came an evil mantis hiding behind the leaves,
        who wouldn't take her no, took her to the sheaves.
                She woke up with horror to figure what happened.
                By now her body was bruised and her wings broken.
Her agony was mourned by nature as she cried
leaves full of dewy tears as if a part of her died.
        She wished death; to be devoured by that mantis.
        Bearing such pain is not easy without practice.
                Time passed by as she learned to survive the odds
                and transformed anew from her old arthropod.
She is no more a shy butterfly but a fearless eagle
with no broken wings neither with a body so feeble.
        Her unfortunate fall made her stronger than before
        and now again into the sunlit azure sky, she soars.
                Such deadly huntress she is with her watchful eyes
                that every preying mantis now fears her despise.

Date : 01/04/2017

Note : For the contest ( Form C ) by Broken Wings - *Placed First*

Yes women are butterflies in terms of their feminine frailty, beauty and elegance. But if you mess with them, they could be as fierce as an eagle to fight back the crimes of abuse, assault and racy comments against them. Sexual violence against women needs to be stopped and dealt with and we men should fully support women in this fight for justice.
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Roper Avatar
January 17, 2017 at 8:55 PM
Wow !! Beautiful, Afzal,, congratulations on your win :)
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January 18, 2017 at 9:46 PM
Thank you, Eve.
Daniel Avatar
January 10, 2017 at 5:48 AM
Am glad to see this won the wonderful top spot:) congratulations, Afzal:)
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January 10, 2017 at 9:46 PM
Thank you, Jo.
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January 9, 2017 at 2:50 PM
Great poem - congrats on a well deserved win, Afzal.
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January 9, 2017 at 10:29 PM
Thank you, Agnes.
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January 9, 2017 at 12:43 PM
Great poem on a topic that should be openly discussed. I am glad she became an eagle. A 7 and a fav. Congratulations on being #1.
Nusker Avatar
January 9, 2017 at 10:26 PM
Thank you very much, Janis.
Rodrigues Avatar
January 9, 2017 at 8:06 AM
So wonderfully written, Azul! You must be a special person! 7 my friend!
Nusker Avatar
January 9, 2017 at 8:10 AM
You humbled me Kim, with your such kind words. Thank you so much.
Raina Avatar
January 9, 2017 at 7:15 AM
A great write.....Afzal you crafted it so well...congratulations on your first place.
Nusker Avatar
January 9, 2017 at 8:08 AM
Thank you very much, Meenakshi.
Stebbings Avatar
January 9, 2017 at 6:10 AM
Congratulations on your top place, Afzul. Thoroughly deserved with this multi-layered piece. // Barry.
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January 9, 2017 at 6:14 AM
Thank you very much, Barry.
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January 4, 2017 at 2:33 PM
Enjoyed reading through your poem, Afzal. May I take this opportunity to wish you a contented and fulfilling New Year...And my very warmest regards! :) john
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January 4, 2017 at 9:35 PM
Thank you so very much, John.
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January 4, 2017 at 10:18 AM
WoW! Afzal, I liked everything about this powerful write.The message was profound and the imagery was amazing. I must say I have been wowed by this write. Kudos to you asking the men to stand with us women on issues we face daily. It's most definitely a winner in my book. If I could rate this piece higher than a seven I would:') Alexis
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January 4, 2017 at 10:46 AM
Thank you so much, Alexis. Your comments are much valued. I am grateful to you for being so kind with me.
Onclaud Avatar
January 4, 2017 at 9:52 AM
ohh, you swayed with this on many levels.. beautifully crafted as a tribute for women, afzal.. huggs
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January 4, 2017 at 10:11 AM
Thank you very much, Nette.
Gupta Avatar
January 4, 2017 at 9:20 AM
Yes, the poem for the contest ... Great job ... Sure to win ...
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January 4, 2017 at 9:39 AM
Thank you, Probir.
Daniel Avatar
January 4, 2017 at 8:28 AM
Wowed by this amazing butterfly tale, Afzal:) perfect for the contest:) a sure winner and a 7 from me:)
Nusker Avatar
January 4, 2017 at 9:38 AM
Thank you so much, Jo.
Dietrich Avatar
January 4, 2017 at 8:15 AM
wow, Afzal. That was amazing. She turned into the eagle to get back at those that prey!! thanks for sharing this amazing butterfly transformation tale.
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January 4, 2017 at 9:37 AM
Thank you very much, Andrea.
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January 4, 2017 at 2:56 AM
Beautiful. Amazing content . Loved every bit of it.
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January 4, 2017 at 4:17 AM
Thank you, Manya.
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