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Outgrew the Broken Wings

Once there was a youthful, bubbly butterfly. Who loved to fly under the sunlit azure sky. Colors of joy reflected from her iridescent wings as she fluttered in the breeze to dance and sing. Through the lush meadow full of fragrant flowers, looking for the sweet nectar she gyrated all over. Cherished by all, her company, her presence. An epitome of beauty, elegance was her essence. Such was her charm that nobody could ignore. Slowly vile gazes followed her to ruin her demure. Many tried to force on her their lewd advances but she somehow managed to escape by chances. Soon enough she learned about the preying mantis, the ones that cruelly victimizes others with tactics Never did she think her charm could be a trouble by turning her joyous life into a daily struggle. Disturbed by her vulnerable being she sat on a rose to drown her worries with a drink of nectar dose. Unaware of the decoy she sipped the whole drink. A potion mixed in it made her conscious shrink. Out came an evil mantis hiding behind the leaves, who wouldn't take her no, took her to the sheaves. She woke up with horror to figure what happened. By now her body was bruised and her wings broken. Her agony was mourned by nature as she cried leaves full of dewy tears as if a part of her died. She wished death; to be devoured by that mantis. Bearing such pain is not easy without practice. Time passed by as she learned to survive the odds and transformed anew from her old arthropod. She is no more a shy butterfly but a fearless eagle with no broken wings neither with a body so feeble. Her unfortunate fall made her stronger than before and now again into the sunlit azure sky, she soars. Such deadly huntress she is with her watchful eyes that every preying mantis now fears her despise. Date : 01/04/2017 Note : For the contest ( Form C ) by Broken Wings - *Placed First* Yes women are butterflies in terms of their feminine frailty, beauty and elegance. But if you mess with them, they could be as fierce as an eagle to fight back the crimes of abuse, assault and racy comments against them. Sexual violence against women needs to be stopped and dealt with and we men should fully support women in this fight for justice.

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Date: 1/17/2017 8:55:00 PM
Wow !! Beautiful, Afzal,, congratulations on your win :)
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Date: 1/18/2017 9:46:00 PM
Thank you, Eve.
Date: 1/10/2017 5:48:00 AM
Am glad to see this won the wonderful top spot:) congratulations, Afzal:)
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Date: 1/10/2017 9:46:00 PM
Thank you, Jo.
Date: 1/9/2017 2:50:00 PM
Great poem - congrats on a well deserved win, Afzal.
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Date: 1/9/2017 10:29:00 PM
Thank you, Agnes.
Date: 1/9/2017 12:43:00 PM
Great poem on a topic that should be openly discussed. I am glad she became an eagle. A 7 and a fav. Congratulations on being #1.
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Date: 1/9/2017 10:26:00 PM
Thank you very much, Janis.
Date: 1/9/2017 8:06:00 AM
So wonderfully written, Azul! You must be a special person! 7 my friend!
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Date: 1/9/2017 8:10:00 AM
You humbled me Kim, with your such kind words. Thank you so much.
Date: 1/9/2017 7:15:00 AM
A great write.....Afzal you crafted it so well...congratulations on your first place.
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Date: 1/9/2017 8:08:00 AM
Thank you very much, Meenakshi.
Date: 1/9/2017 6:10:00 AM
Congratulations on your top place, Afzul. Thoroughly deserved with this multi-layered piece. // Barry.
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Date: 1/9/2017 6:14:00 AM
Thank you very much, Barry.
Date: 1/4/2017 2:33:00 PM
Enjoyed reading through your poem, Afzal. May I take this opportunity to wish you a contented and fulfilling New Year...And my very warmest regards! :) john
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Date: 1/4/2017 9:35:00 PM
Thank you so very much, John.
Date: 1/4/2017 10:18:00 AM
WoW! Afzal, I liked everything about this powerful write.The message was profound and the imagery was amazing. I must say I have been wowed by this write. Kudos to you asking the men to stand with us women on issues we face daily. It's most definitely a winner in my book. If I could rate this piece higher than a seven I would:') Alexis
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Date: 1/4/2017 10:46:00 AM
Thank you so much, Alexis. Your comments are much valued. I am grateful to you for being so kind with me.
Date: 1/4/2017 9:52:00 AM
ohh, you swayed with this on many levels.. beautifully crafted as a tribute for women, afzal.. huggs
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Date: 1/4/2017 10:11:00 AM
Thank you very much, Nette.
Date: 1/4/2017 9:20:00 AM
Yes, the poem for the contest ... Great job ... Sure to win ...
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Date: 1/4/2017 9:39:00 AM
Thank you, Probir.
Date: 1/4/2017 8:28:00 AM
Wowed by this amazing butterfly tale, Afzal:) perfect for the contest:) a sure winner and a 7 from me:)
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Date: 1/4/2017 9:38:00 AM
Thank you so much, Jo.
Date: 1/4/2017 8:15:00 AM
wow, Afzal. That was amazing. She turned into the eagle to get back at those that prey!! thanks for sharing this amazing butterfly transformation tale.
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Date: 1/4/2017 9:37:00 AM
Thank you very much, Andrea.
Date: 1/4/2017 2:56:00 AM
Beautiful. Amazing content . Loved every bit of it.
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Date: 1/4/2017 4:17:00 AM
Thank you, Manya.

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