outer time,outer man

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my writing is called philosophical writing. i only uses middle ages words,words from the renaissance. for instance words liked gracious,extravaganza,etc... this poem is about time,space,is a outer time and space. i don’t add capitalization’s on my writing.

man is a display of man
man is a outer display
space is a outer display of man
space is a outer display of the universe
the universe is a display of the universe
the universe is a display of man
man is mankind display

man of space,man of display,man of mankind
outer space,outer mankind,outer focus
mankind focus on mankind
a focus space is a focus man
a focus space is a focus universe
mankind focus on outer space
time focus on time

time focus on outer time
time focus on outer space
outer time focus on outer time
time display time
time display space
time display the universe
time display man

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Tom Woody

Date: 11/4/2024 1:27:00 PM

Outer Limits. Good one Luke