Outback Duel

There are no laws designed by man that mean a thing out where,
the drying sun on pastel lands can’t lead all to despair,
where frightened eyes can see for miles across the saltbush plain,
where death becomes a great relief to those who suffer pain.

And I who after all these years look back and still recall,
what I consider in my mind the worst death of them all,
when near finished droving what must have been ten thousand sheep.
Out there on those lonely plains two deaths near made me weep.

My dogs and I were droving two thousand for the shed,
on a station north-west of Balranald where I’d always see ‘em dead;
bogged in the tanks, or near the tracks; bleached bones and dirty wool.
Eye-less sockets (blame the crows) or dingoes never full.

Yet nothing hit me harder when I noticed white and dull,
in the distance to the left of me an old merino’s skull,
with spiral horns of mammoth size fit for a bar room trophy,
still where the old ram met his death, entangled in a tree. 

I tried to judge the reason; tried to reconstruct the plot.
I could only guess the ram went to rub an itchy spot,
on that Belar of tender age; a trunk still straight and slim.
One horn wound like a corkscrew that soon entangled him.

Lord knows how long that luckless ram walked around the tree.
A deep circled trench gave evidence; walked ‘round endlessly.
Alas though if it was not thirst, his dilemma doomed him prey.
Torn to pieces by a pack; or wedge-tailed eagles had their way.

I remember lifting up my head and took the time to ponder,
the vast emptiness surrounding me and that struggle over yonder.
One Belar had met its fate where there’s no referee to rule -
One merino lost its life in this tragic outback duel.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020



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Date: 8/20/2020 11:18:00 AM
Hi Lindsay, It is sad to see and imagine how that poor animal suffered. We have seen several instances at the Kruger National Park but one sticks in my mind. Lions brought down a teenage elephant, he lay there still not quite dead, whilst a pack of Lions were feeding on him. But Rangers never interfere, they feel that this is natural in the wild, but I couldn't watch. The cars parked around this scene were well over a hundred, we just got a glimpse, but that was enough! Blessings Jennifer.
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Date: 8/25/2020 10:05:00 PM
Hello Jennifer ... oh gosh, your comment made me shiver at the thought as it's not in our to allow suffering. This poor ram wouldn't have lasted two maybe three days in the outback heat - thanks once more Jennifer - Lindsay
Date: 8/15/2020 8:55:00 PM
Could feel the loneliness in your verse Lindsay, that vast plain where man and creature alone against the elements. Tom
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Date: 8/19/2020 9:48:00 PM
Hello Tom ... by human standards, you feel like you're the person on this earth, but for the fauna there is nowhere else to go, so the daily struggle goes on - thanks Tom - Lindsay
Date: 8/15/2020 2:16:00 PM
Another great poem, Lindsay! People who complain their life is in a rut, don't know the half of it! Aloha! Rico
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Date: 8/19/2020 9:45:00 PM
Hello Rico ... Correct Rico. the outback is such a vast, empty, and lonely place, so to find animals that must have suffered greatly before death is heart breaking - thanks Rico - Lindsay
Date: 8/13/2020 10:47:00 AM
A story well-told in this vividly descriptive poem, Lindsay. Janice
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Date: 8/19/2020 9:41:00 PM
Hello Janice ... thank you for writing a positive comment. I appreciate it Janice - Lindsay
Date: 8/13/2020 9:21:00 AM
Wow! Lindsay, what fascinating story! Loved it and a couple of other of your splendid writes on soup today. Keep on delighting with your Aussie tales - Bob
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Date: 8/19/2020 9:39:00 PM
Hello Bob ... writing poems of the outback, after humour, is my favourite topic to write about. It looks barren but there's so much richness about it - thanks Bob - Lindsay
Date: 8/12/2020 7:59:00 PM
Some would have it that animals 'in the state of nature' are so kind to each other. Others, who have been out there, know the truth: "It's a jungle out there," is a famous saying for a reason! Thanks for this narrative, Lindsay! :) gw
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Date: 8/19/2020 9:36:00 PM
Hello Gershon ... in the vast outback, every day presents a life and death situation. Often standing close to an animals corpse I can't help think of how lonely a place to reach its demise - thank you Gershon - Lindsay
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