Outback

God just made a terrible blunder
Clearly revealed by claps of thunder
There was no sinner
Just Aussie dinner
After poking around Down Under
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Laurie Avatar
February 19, 2021 at 2:41 PM
G’day Rico … don’t they go ‘fishing’ like this in the US too - thanks Rico - Lindsay
Devonshire Avatar
February 15, 2021 at 11:54 AM
Great play of words with "Down Under," Rico! (Outback Steak House is my favorite restaurant. Wonder if the steak is that good in Aussie Land. Hugs, Carolyn
Horsman Avatar
February 13, 2021 at 8:43 PM
Great theme on down under, Rico. Love this Limerick.
Leffanta Avatar
February 14, 2021 at 10:32 AM
Mahalo, Harry! Aloha! Rico
Wolf Avatar
February 13, 2021 at 7:04 PM
You have coined a new restaurant item, special for folks with the Pandemic blues -- Aussie dinner. Give every customer a free poke before ordering... :)
Leffanta Avatar
February 14, 2021 at 10:32 AM
One can enjoy poke just about everywhere in Hawai'i! Aloha! Rico
Bauer Avatar
February 13, 2021 at 11:22 AM
ha! very funny one, rico!
Leffanta Avatar
February 14, 2021 at 10:32 AM
Good to keep you laughing! Aloha! Rico
Allison Avatar
February 13, 2021 at 10:00 AM
ha ha ha this is hilarious Rico:-) hugs Jan xx
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