Outback

God just made a terrible blunder Clearly revealed by claps of thunder There was no sinner Just Aussie dinner After poking around Down Under

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Lindsay Laurie

Date: 2/19/2021 2:41:00 PM

G’day Rico … don’t they go ‘fishing’ like this in the US too - thanks Rico - Lindsay

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 2/15/2021 11:54:00 AM

Great play of words with "Down Under," Rico! (Outback Steak House is my favorite restaurant. Wonder if the steak is that good in Aussie Land. Hugs, Carolyn

Harry Horsman

Date: 2/13/2021 8:43:00 PM

Great theme on down under, Rico. Love this Limerick.

Rico Leffanta
Date: 2/14/2021 10:32:00 AM

Mahalo, Harry! Aloha! Rico

Gershon Wolf

Date: 2/13/2021 7:04:00 PM

You have coined a new restaurant item, special for folks with the Pandemic blues -- Aussie dinner. Give every customer a free poke before ordering... :)

Rico Leffanta
Date: 2/14/2021 10:32:00 AM

One can enjoy poke just about everywhere in Hawai'i! Aloha! Rico

Ilene Bauer

Date: 2/13/2021 11:22:00 AM

ha! very funny one, rico!

Rico Leffanta
Date: 2/14/2021 10:32:00 AM

Good to keep you laughing! Aloha! Rico

Jan Allison

Date: 2/13/2021 10:00:00 AM

ha ha ha this is hilarious Rico:-) hugs Jan xx