Out With the Old

I once got a piece of advice
And you’d think that one time would suffice
But I didn’t take heed,
Not that I disagreed,
And so now I am paying the price.

The suggestion was each time you buy
Something new, with this rule you comply – 
You must then give away,
Without doubt or delay,
Something old (or passé, they’d imply).

If I just could obey that command
Then I finally would understand
That my closets could be
No reflection of me
But like those Marie Kondo* had planned.

*the Japanese Queen of decluttering
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Rigoler Avatar
October 11, 2019 at 1:04 PM
What a coincidence, I cleaned out a large drawer on my desk and now there's room to add more junk! Some things never improve. / M
Johnson Avatar
October 8, 2019 at 7:04 PM
These last two poems sound like you're trying to get uncluttered. Sounds like a good idea. My closet has been attacking me lately. :/ Uhg. :)
Wood Avatar
October 8, 2019 at 6:19 PM
I am afraid I share this ailment! A fun trio of limericks.
De Beaulieu Avatar
October 7, 2019 at 2:44 PM
Hello Ilene Bauer, when I buy something new. I give up something I no longer need. Give it to Good Will someone will need it. have a nice day my friend.
Krutsinger Avatar
October 7, 2019 at 1:43 PM
My mother actually abides by this rule. She is the only person I know who does.
Allison Avatar
October 7, 2019 at 1:00 PM
lol Ilene I too am loathe to part with possessions especially clothes, I say one day I will de-clutter but we both know tomorrow never comes lol:-) hugs jan xx
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