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Out the Window Ii

OUT THE WINDOW II There is no wind or at least little just the tops The sky all clouds all steel-gray Thoughts go steady unwavering I relish the peace relax totally How strange nature asleep But then on the instant – In answer; Leaves begin to dance Oh I tell you something listens Thoughts (perhaps) are not isolated are UNIVERSAL! And in reaction I start to consider What is alive? Why! Everything! Everything physical But the most awesome all consuming life is realized In that quiet place That haven Out the window

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Constance La France

Date: 6/3/2011 7:29:00 PM

wonderful as Part 1, awesome writing~~

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/2/2011 3:14:00 PM

I believe that our thoughts are heard by God, Jesus, Holy Spirit, and the Angels..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/31/2011 9:08:00 PM

daver,thank you so much for always putting up poems like these that are such a joy to read. and I am really sorry to learn that all these health problems have come to you at once. Geeez, you really scare me. I already have arthritis and stuff and I'm not even in my 60's yet. So it is gonna get worse and worse and worse? EEEEEKS. I dont' want to live a long life anymore! anyway, keep on being your cheery wondeful self.YOu are a breath of joy here at soup.

Daver Austin
Date: 6/1/2011 1:45:00 PM

Sometimes things pile up, but someone with your talent and sweet personality must live many, many more years for the good of humanity

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 5/31/2011 5:56:00 PM

A brilliant piece , deep and profound, daver

James Foulk

Date: 5/31/2011 5:28:00 PM

very good write, will there be a 3rd one done by the great one. thank you commenting on Fallen Tree.

Sarah Seraphin

Date: 5/31/2011 4:50:00 PM

* “Very Profound & Intriguing Reflection * Set Amid The Gray of Natures More UnKnowing Possibilities Moments * My Dear Highly Gifted & Precious Daver. * Yet * Spoken Within A Softer Tone * Somewhat Like Having An Unpleasant Dream * All The While As The Conscious Is Speaking In Whispers of Reasurrance That Everything Is Going to Be Fine * Love It. * And Yesss * I Do Believe That to Some Degree * All of Creation Is Connected. * Sincerely Yours * Sarah” *

James Peranteau

Date: 5/30/2011 5:45:00 PM

Ya had me reading this over and over Dave, until my mind left for a spell and consumed this write of yours dear poet, with much delight ! Very good sir ! Have a wonderful week my friend...much love, james

Michelle Mac Donald

Date: 5/30/2011 5:34:00 PM

I think thoughts are "UNIVERSAL" too, Daver! Might think of someone who is close and get a call or a letter. "that quiet place, That haven Out the window" seems to be teeming with energy. A thought provoking write! Best to you and yours...Love, Mikki

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 5/30/2011 12:58:00 PM

very nice poetry my friend