Out Or In

In and out, out or in,
Addicted to escape this world, to be set free
Flew over cuckoo’s nest so many times
That I can’t recall my in and out, my out or in
I just want to live

TOP WIN! :)
Rehabilitation
Contest Judged:  5/31/2018 2:53:00 PM
Sponsored by: Julia Ward
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Gauthier Avatar
June 1, 2018 at 10:07 PM
Congrats on your top win, Natasha. Well done.
Turner Avatar
June 2, 2018 at 12:04 AM
Thanks dear :)
Densham Avatar
June 1, 2018 at 8:23 PM
Congrats! Nicely done.y6h
Turner Avatar
June 2, 2018 at 12:04 AM
Thanks :)
Gentry Avatar
May 31, 2018 at 7:57 PM
Congratulations on your win.
Lamoureux Avatar
May 31, 2018 at 4:18 PM
Well done Natasha, I can see why Julia chose to honour this piece. Congrats on a fine win.
Turner Avatar
May 31, 2018 at 4:22 PM
Thanks Richard. I've dedicated all my life helping drug addicts so this means a lot to me :) :)
Roper Avatar
May 31, 2018 at 4:04 PM
Congratulations on a very creative great win.. hugs eve
Turner Avatar
May 31, 2018 at 4:09 PM
Hugs Eve xxx
Gondolf Avatar
May 31, 2018 at 3:01 PM
Congrats once again, you're having a good day! John
Turner Avatar
May 31, 2018 at 3:13 PM
iT'S TRUE.. i AM LOL..Feeling so happy! Thanks John :) :)
Ward Avatar
May 31, 2018 at 2:57 PM
This is nicely poetic and forceful so I chose your poem to be the top win. Well done for its composition, Natasha. Julia, :)
Turner Avatar
May 31, 2018 at 3:14 PM
I loved this challenge so much and I'm very honoured to get the top win. Thanks a lot Julia and so happy that you loved it! :) xxx
Gauthier Avatar
May 12, 2018 at 12:44 PM
Cute little bite of poetry, Natasha.
Turner Avatar
May 31, 2018 at 3:15 PM
Thanks dear..got a top win...wow ..feeling awesome xxx
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