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OUT OF WATER

Nineteen fishes and an otter Wondered if it could be hotter But they didn't know if it could - They had gone away for good Reason? Simple - Out of water! For contest - Out of water My second limerick

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Date: 4/12/2015 8:32:00 PM
Great job on your second limerick. Loved your imagination in this one.
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Date: 3/5/2015 5:31:00 AM
What a sad limerick. How ever many good reads are sad. Best of luck in the contest.
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Sneha RV
Date: 4/12/2015 11:35:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 3/3/2015 6:19:00 PM
you did same as me, used limerick form for this one. Good luck in the contest, sweetie.
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Sneha RV
Date: 3/3/2015 7:38:00 PM
Oh! Thanks so much, Andrea!
Date: 3/3/2015 5:08:00 PM
Nineteen fishes and an otter, what a cute scene you set darlin' :)
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Sneha RV
Date: 3/3/2015 7:39:00 PM
Thank you, Dear Casarah! (;
Date: 3/3/2015 11:26:00 AM
clever limerick - the final line is so sad:-( Good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Sneha RV
Date: 3/3/2015 7:40:00 PM
Thank you! I hope it id ok for the contest (: