Out of Water

Nineteen fishes and an otter Wondered if it could be hotter But they didn't know if it could - They had gone away for good Reason? Simple - Out of water! For contest - Out of water My second limerick

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Maurice Yvonne

Date: 4/12/2015 8:32:00 PM

Great job on your second limerick. Loved your imagination in this one.

Scott Thirtyseven

Date: 3/5/2015 5:31:00 AM

What a sad limerick. How ever many good reads are sad. Best of luck in the contest.

Sneha Rv
Date: 4/12/2015 11:35:00 PM

Thank you!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/3/2015 6:19:00 PM

you did same as me, used limerick form for this one. Good luck in the contest, sweetie.

Sneha Rv
Date: 3/3/2015 7:38:00 PM

Oh! Thanks so much, Andrea!

Casarah Nance

Date: 3/3/2015 5:08:00 PM

Nineteen fishes and an otter, what a cute scene you set darlin' :)

Sneha Rv
Date: 3/3/2015 7:39:00 PM

Thank you, Dear Casarah! (;

Jan Allison

Date: 3/3/2015 11:26:00 AM

clever limerick - the final line is so sad:-( Good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xx

Sneha Rv
Date: 3/3/2015 7:40:00 PM

Thank you! I hope it id ok for the contest (: