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Out of Tune

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My autoharp was way out of tune
With it could not longer in tune croon
Took it to the music man
He tuned it to match his band
Now my sound is truly bassoon

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Brown Avatar
October 28, 2011 at 8:26 AM
Thank you for your always kind comments on my writing Sara. It is a pleasure to read your poetry this fine day. Hoping you have an amazing weekend. Love, Carol
Devonshire Avatar
October 27, 2011 at 6:26 PM
Funny poem, Sara. I'm glad I checked the picture. The autoharp looks something like a piano/harp hybrid. Do you play it? Enjoyed your limerick very much. Love, Carolyn
Horne Avatar
October 27, 2011 at 8:33 AM
LOL, witty piece. Is the autoharp similar to a normal harp? Many congrats on your wins too, my friend : )
Dietrich Avatar
October 27, 2011 at 12:54 AM
Cute one, Sara (last word should rhyme with tune and croon). I think I heard of an autoharp somewhere before. And you made me think of the music man movie. I bet you recall that one. the story took place in my beloved Iowa!
The Rogue Rhymer Avatar
October 26, 2011 at 6:08 PM
Love it Sara!!!
Johnson Avatar
October 26, 2011 at 3:01 PM
And music in you blooming , great poem babe....
Babcock Avatar
October 26, 2011 at 11:38 AM
Enjoyed reading your poem today Sara. I don't play and instrument so could not tell if it was in tune or not. Hope all is well with you and your family. love phyl
Lane Avatar
October 26, 2011 at 7:49 AM
Pull up an episode of "The Third Man." It's an old radio show and the theme music was played on an out of tune autoharp. It is a very distictive sound. Tony
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