Out of Tune

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. My autoharp was way out of tune With it could not longer in tune croon Took it to the music man He tuned it to match his band Now my sound is truly bassoon Check note

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/28/2011 8:26:00 AM

Thank you for your always kind comments on my writing Sara. It is a pleasure to read your poetry this fine day. Hoping you have an amazing weekend. Love, Carol

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 10/27/2011 6:26:00 PM

Funny poem, Sara. I'm glad I checked the picture. The autoharp looks something like a piano/harp hybrid. Do you play it? Enjoyed your limerick very much. Love, Carolyn

Jack Horne

Date: 10/27/2011 8:33:00 AM

LOL, witty piece. Is the autoharp similar to a normal harp? Many congrats on your wins too, my friend : )

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/27/2011 12:54:00 AM

Cute one, Sara (last word should rhyme with tune and croon). I think I heard of an autoharp somewhere before. And you made me think of the music man movie. I bet you recall that one. the story took place in my beloved Iowa!

Natalie The Rogue Rhymer

Date: 10/26/2011 6:08:00 PM

Love it Sara!!!

Don Johnson

Date: 10/26/2011 3:01:00 PM

And music in you blooming , great poem babe....

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 10/26/2011 11:38:00 AM

Enjoyed reading your poem today Sara. I don't play and instrument so could not tell if it was in tune or not. Hope all is well with you and your family. love phyl

Tony Lane

Date: 10/26/2011 7:49:00 AM

Pull up an episode of "The Third Man." It's an old radio show and the theme music was played on an out of tune autoharp. It is a very distictive sound. Tony