Out of This World!

A black hole

floats in space..... 

.....it slowly melts

unspeakably spinning

into a shining star~

Within ones spirit

floating in space

ones poor image melts 

couragously changing

into a glimmering soul

which in turn is...

OUT OF THIS WORLD~
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Higgins Avatar
March 19, 2009 at 4:34 AM
Another very strong write from you...within one spirit floating in space...yes indeed..awesome write and truths.
Strand Avatar
March 15, 2009 at 1:31 AM
Clever writing Jane..like the last line.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments
Rhinem Avatar
March 14, 2009 at 3:17 AM
...."couragously changing into a glimmering soul which in turn is...(Smile) OUT OF THIS WORLD!"~ What a reflection this beautifully spendid write is of its writers "Precious Heart & Soul!!!"~Smile~"Perfect Dear!!!"~Again, I hope "You" are doing very well!? And, I miss "You" really!!!~"My Love & Warmth To You Always Jane, Forever, John!!!"~Bye Dear Lady!:):)
Rhinem Avatar
March 14, 2009 at 3:10 AM
Smile~Wow, so very very beautiful!!!~How are You Janey? Extremely well I hope!!? It is so good to see "You" dear~You know, I have been thinking about and looking for You dear!!?~"A black hole floats in space.....it slowly melts unspeakably spinning into a shining star"~ Smile~So creatively and imaginatively beautiful dear!!!....cont....
Reynolds Avatar
March 14, 2009 at 2:00 AM
Yes indeedy, out of this world, is where we all begin, and, and if we have will, live. awesome, friend - love, Kristin
Townsend Avatar
March 13, 2009 at 8:46 PM
This is an exceptonal write. It inspires one to look within and find the light that truly guides ones soul. So beautifull expressed. I love the way you included the universe into this powerful message of hope and peace. Smiles from Lolita
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