Out of the Sea

wondrous stuff is happening
awash within a silent bay 
a cell appears, divides 
and life reflected in its mother home,
a tender hydra will eschew its rest
and for a moment
infant man will stand in awe
a billion years beyond

how many oceans, galaxies away
would/could replicate
or yet enhance the theme?
what shapes a final product
sniveling in its own completeness?
and where is that impatient mind
that will not ponder  limits
to a diadem?

what even pushes us to question
what we cannot know?
Is life the ultimate creation--
for we bear within, an innate prejudice
and  then the path of danger when
without is unapproached.

what is it to advance? 
Is there desire to force our own mutation?
or will we lie fallow
letting change progress,
rising with the wind to follow joy?
ignoring metamorphosis beyond?
the choice is entropy.

forsight will always shine
upon a new division
where it lurks
beyond a footprint.
one obstreperous fork
to madden every zealous heart
and closeup looks reveal infinity
within/without
while chaos  is the cause
for celebration.

who or what may limit
man's imagining?
and who will portion out
the better from the best?
it is an awesome choice
and history seduces
with its virtue and its folly.

but we are history as well,
etching our wisdom in encapsulated time,
ignoring deadlines' visionless decrees.
and where but from within
will stir that motivating force
that most of us call god?
           ~

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 7/26/2012 2:27:00 PM
What can I say to perfection of the written word. So beautfully expressed...yet with scientific ingenuity. Very, very well done Ann
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Date: 7/26/2012 2:39:00 PM
..,doubt its perfection, dear one, but I appreciate the thought. I hope you will look at more. :-)
Date: 7/14/2012 10:15:00 AM
Happy weekend to you Robert. I enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry this morning. Thank you for sharing your writing with us. Love, Carol
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Robert Ludden
Date: 7/14/2012 10:29:00 AM
Thank you for watching for it. I hope that I may always maintain your interest, Carol
Date: 7/13/2012 4:25:00 PM
Either, but I much prefer "Dean" which is my middle name. Of course I prefer free verse--it gives me the most flexibility. Yes I am sure you write good sonnets. I don't know how to sort, but I'll eventually get around to reading yours---since I do not want to miss any of your fine stuff. And I prize your comments highly! -Dean
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Date: 7/13/2012 2:26:00 PM
Couldn't agree MORE with your content, loved the use of adult vocab! [enshew, enhance, encapsulated] LOL may I call you Bob or are you a full robert? [YES I know the sonnet was a bit of fluff as a write but the sentiment toward that particular friend was heartfelt and truly most here do not enjoy or understand the writes in Free Verse which I love, which are multi-faceted so sometimes I do play to the judge or the audience ;) ;) Hard to takes oneself seriously 24/7] Light & Love
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Date: 7/13/2012 2:26:00 PM
PS sort my writes for SONNETS and you will see I can write a good sonnet ;)
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