Kim Rodrigues Poet Free verse

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THIS POEM IS ABOUT MY CONFUSION WITH TECHNOLOGY

Out of the Frying Pan

Sizzling technology fried up dark and crisp like bacon
Not the way i like it with sunny side up eggs
Driving me mad with its peculiar nuances
And its changing ways, almost sinister
A cape of confusion too crisp on the outlying whites
The rooster crows, pounding its chest, so proud
But the defeated farmer runs to the barn to diminish the flames

Kim Rodrigues © 2017

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Maria Williams April 22, 2017 at 4:28 AM Oh you are too right, I just cant keep up with all this technology either , so I do the next best thing, I leave it up to my husband. Great verse Kim. Kim Rodrigues April 22, 2017 at 6:05 AM Yup! My husband helps me too!

Bawa Talwar April 21, 2017 at 9:44 PM Its all about face of things changing quick as mercury.i agree there's confusion in there. Nice use of imagery the sunny side up.... Kindly read my new additions. Kim Rodrigues April 21, 2017 at 9:46 PM Thank you, Bawa, for the read!

Frank Sheehan April 19, 2017 at 12:45 PM Nice write. I enjoyed the imagery. It's amazing how technology has taken over our lives. Kim Rodrigues April 19, 2017 at 12:57 PM So true! It should make things easier but it still has difficult aspects. Thank you, Frank!

White Wolf April 19, 2017 at 11:45 AM This one leaves me scratching my head a bit I must confess! The imagery that I am receiving is rather peculiar indeed! So the barn burned down with all the farm animals inside I gather, from a faulty electrical appliance? Am I near the honey jar? Kim Rodrigues April 19, 2017 at 11:49 AM No! The whole poem is about my anxiety over technology! Trying to figure things out! I was using Word on my ipad now there is a space between each line with no fix. Now i'm trying google docs! Why so much confusion! :)