Out of the Frying Pan

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THIS POEM IS ABOUT MY CONFUSION WITH TECHNOLOGY

Sizzling technology fried up dark and crisp like bacon
Not the way i like it with sunny side up eggs
Driving me mad with its peculiar nuances
And its changing ways, almost sinister
A cape of confusion too crisp on the outlying whites
The rooster crows, pounding its chest, so proud
But the defeated farmer runs to the barn to diminish the flames

Kim Rodrigues © 2017

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 4/22/2017 4:28:00 AM
Oh you are too right, I just cant keep up with all this technology either , so I do the next best thing, I leave it up to my husband. Great verse Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/22/2017 6:05:00 AM
Yup! My husband helps me too!
Date: 4/21/2017 9:44:00 PM
Its all about face of things changing quick as mercury.i agree there's confusion in there. Nice use of imagery the sunny side up.... Kindly read my new additions.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/21/2017 9:46:00 PM
Thank you, Bawa, for the read!
Date: 4/19/2017 12:45:00 PM
Nice write. I enjoyed the imagery. It's amazing how technology has taken over our lives.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/19/2017 12:57:00 PM
So true! It should make things easier but it still has difficult aspects. Thank you, Frank!
Date: 4/19/2017 11:45:00 AM
This one leaves me scratching my head a bit I must confess! The imagery that I am receiving is rather peculiar indeed! So the barn burned down with all the farm animals inside I gather, from a faulty electrical appliance? Am I near the honey jar?
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/19/2017 11:49:00 AM
No! The whole poem is about my anxiety over technology! Trying to figure things out! I was using Word on my ipad now there is a space between each line with no fix. Now i'm trying google docs! Why so much confusion! :)
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