William Kelii Kekaula Poet Monorhyme

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Out of the Blue

Our baby coos after a restful sleep,
Ah-boo, ah-boo, ah-boo, sounds I would repeat,

With his eyes wide open, he sneaks a peek,
Ah-boo, ah-boo, ah-boo, sounds I would repeat,

Only cute chuckles he renders for he cannot speak,
Ah-boo, ah-boo, ah-boo, sounds I would repeat,

Tried to have him say, "mama", all through the week,
Ah-boo, ah-boo, ah-boo, sounds I would repeat,

Suddenly, he says "mama", I dropped down to my feet
From ah-boo now I say mama, sounds that I repeat.

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Constance La France May 24, 2019 at 7:21 AM William, this write is delightful, well done. I have sent you a urgent soupmail can you please check it. William Kelii Kekaula May 24, 2019 at 8:25 AM Thank you and yes I did read your message and I hope the applicable changes are in compliance, Aloha wk

Andrea Dietrich May 13, 2019 at 3:37 PM Love this one and how you changed that repeating line!! William Kelii Kekaula May 13, 2019 at 4:11 PM Yes, monotonous as I've slowly squeezed the lemon thoroughly, forming the pucker in the end, hm maybe I should write, but not until I say 'Thanks Andrea!", Aloha wk PS: btw, picture of my great grandson whose grandpa is sitting on my lap of my profile picture

Vijay Pandit May 13, 2019 at 3:22 PM This is just excellent..so well done, William. William Kelii Kekaula May 13, 2019 at 4:14 PM Pales in comparison to the few I've read of yours--no doubt, further viewing of your work is imperative, thanks Vijay!, Aloha wk PS: btw, picture of my great grandson whose grandpa is sitting on my lap of my profile picture