Out of the Blue

I don't know me or the world anymore,
I'm sure I'm unsure as I search for a cure.

I look for a reason to fight,
I've lost my bark,
I've lost my bite,
I can't see the dark,
I can't see the light.

I've got nothing to live for, nothing at all,
there is no wall, no floor, it's just me in freefall.

There's no pill that'll heal this feeling I feel
and nothing can conceal this feeling so rotten,
I swear falling like this is really rock bottom.

There's no stop to this drop,
unless I top myself and slot 
into the floor and live in a coffin.

A year ago today I'd only wrote one poem,
now look at the flow and the skill that I'm showing,
my own unknown talent which I have now grown,
went from dormant to the forefront, I'm so in the zone.

On the day of the crux when I could of collapsed,
I opened a door never opened before,
and found some new tracks and to them I strapped,
there was no going back from a light I had found,
my bite came back and my bark made sound,
there were walls and floors, I stood tall and warred,
now I'm a poet and I show it to the world.

From never even being interested,
to rhymes that are easily digested,
I went to that place to get to this one
and out of nothing rhyme is the outcome.

POTD 14/09/2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Nicole Avatar
September 14, 2018 at 10:08 PM
If this was thought of- out of the blue. Then, you have created a masterpiece. Truly worthy of being Poem of the Day!! When words can tangle around each other, emotions are set free. It is Poetry!! Congratulations Nick. ~ Brandy
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September 14, 2018 at 6:10 PM
This is wonderful poem Nick! I left a comment, but I don't see it. So I am returning to tell you Congratulations on having it honored for POTD! : )
Lindley Avatar
September 14, 2018 at 5:17 PM
Huge congratulations my friend on receiving POTD honors!
Michael Avatar
September 14, 2018 at 4:11 PM
You're in the grove... Congratulations...All the best Nick
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September 14, 2018 at 4:39 PM
Thanks Arturo :)
La France Avatar
September 14, 2018 at 3:31 PM
Congrat on potd
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September 14, 2018 at 4:39 PM
Thank you :)
Mcconnell Avatar
September 14, 2018 at 3:07 PM
A fine penned piece Nick, congratulations on receiving the POTD, fully deserved! Have a great day, Gordon
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September 14, 2018 at 4:38 PM
Thanks Gordon :)
Smith Avatar
September 14, 2018 at 12:18 PM
Wow! Welcome Nick and congratulations on your honor...
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September 14, 2018 at 4:38 PM
Thanks Charlie :)
Doll Avatar
September 14, 2018 at 11:47 AM
Nick, back to congratulate you on POTD.~ Warren
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September 14, 2018 at 4:38 PM
Thanks Warren :)
Wanter Avatar
September 14, 2018 at 9:35 AM
Great talent! Congratulations!
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September 14, 2018 at 11:20 AM
Thanks Sunlite Wanter….. (Cool name btw lol)
Pett Avatar
September 14, 2018 at 8:15 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved POTD Nick with your well written and inspirational poem. :))
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September 14, 2018 at 11:19 AM
Thanks Roy :)
Messina Avatar
September 14, 2018 at 7:49 AM
Great work Nick, I myself have only started writing in this amazing poetry world for about three years now. It's amazing how our hidden talents can come out late in our lives. Congratulations on your well deserved POTD...All the best and keep the ink flowing...Charlie
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September 14, 2018 at 11:19 AM
Thanks Charlie, it is amazing how you can try something you'd never thought of and find it to be one of the most natural things you have ever done!! thanks again :)
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September 14, 2018 at 7:28 AM
Congrats on your POTD Nick. Great Poem !!
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September 14, 2018 at 11:17 AM
Thanks Mike :)
Cunningham Avatar
September 14, 2018 at 5:36 AM
Plenty of bark here Nick, congrats on POTD. Tom.
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September 14, 2018 at 7:12 AM
Thank You Tom :)
Warrior Avatar
September 14, 2018 at 5:35 AM
Out of the blue...a poet is born...in this early of the morn...Congrats!!! my friend on your POTD!...love & light...^WW^
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September 14, 2018 at 7:12 AM
Thank You WW :)
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September 13, 2018 at 7:46 AM
Nick, great rhyme. I especially liked the last stanza. Well done. ~ Warren
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September 14, 2018 at 7:13 AM
Thank You Warren :)
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September 12, 2018 at 12:38 PM
Hello Nick Trim, you did very well with this poem We all get writer's block every now and then. Have a nice day my friend.
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September 14, 2018 at 7:14 AM
Thank You Darlene, have a nice day :)
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