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Out of Sight

Elderly Ed Yates had trouble seeing but he kept on driving unperceiving. Alas one day he slipped and he and his car flipped. The mess he left was beyond conceiving.

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Jan Allison

Date: 7/20/2016 11:32:00 AM

Judging by the amount of accidents I think that there are many drivers who would benefit from sight tests - great limerick Paul:-) hugs Jan xx

Paul Schneiter
Date: 7/20/2016 10:58:00 PM

You speak the truth, Jan (you always do). Thank you for your insightful (no pun intended) and thoughtful comment. love and hugs xxx

Adam Kinsley

Date: 7/19/2016 2:08:00 AM

"Inconceivable!"

Paul Schneiter
Date: 7/19/2016 7:10:00 AM

Thank you for commenting, Adam. A better last line might have been "The mess he left set folks to heaving."

Cheryl Hoffman

Date: 7/18/2016 8:33:00 PM

Yikes, sounds like poor Ed totaled it…hope he got out of the fray ok! Cute one Paul!:)

Paul Schneiter
Date: 7/19/2016 7:13:00 AM

It's thoughtful of you to comment, cheryl. Please know I appreciate it. love & hugs x x x