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Out of Reach

Mars planet so near
Like love forbidden to touch 
Must not give up hope


6/21/15

Copyright © Judy Konos | Year Posted 2015

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Constance La France

June 26, 2015 at 1:18 PM

Judy, I like your Senryu about the red planet, the unknow could be the answer we seek and I want to thank you for my awesome placement in your The Interview contest, I am honored

June 26, 2015 at 1:46 PM

Like I said, "Nothing broken about your wings"....

Richard Lamoureux

June 25, 2015 at 7:13 AM

What about all the men that are still there? They will be so disappointed if some women don't make the trip! I enjoyed your Haiku Judy. Good luck in the contest.

June 25, 2015 at 7:53 AM

What about them? That's your problem! LOL

Andrea Dietrich

June 24, 2015 at 3:35 PM

you chose a great route with this contest on Mars, Judy. Good job. soupmail.

June 24, 2015 at 4:26 PM

yes indeed.....and thanks for the comment

June 22, 2015 at 7:44 PM

Great Senryu, my good good friend, Miss Judy! Love ya lots, Jacko xxx

June 22, 2015 at 8:43 PM

Hello Jackson....get in the Limerick contest...you are a whipper snapper at Limericks...dots for sho

June 22, 2015 at 5:04 AM

How scientifcally and emotionally true, Judy. Very nice Senryu. Viv x

June 22, 2015 at 8:46 PM

Thank you Viv...just trying to "imagine' being in love and thinking about Mars! That takes a bit of gall without the bladder! C YA

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

June 21, 2015 at 11:10 PM

Never give up hope...wise words, Judy! Hugs, Rhonda

June 22, 2015 at 8:49 PM

thanks for stopping by Rhonda....

Peter Lewis Holmes

June 21, 2015 at 6:12 PM

Mars, another rock in space!...poignant poem Judy and thanks for the comment..Peter.

June 22, 2015 at 8:48 PM

hey thanks...and I changed it up a bit...what could be more boring than Mars...when we have the Moon...lol

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