Out of My Coma World

Will i tend to forget
The innermost part
Of my memory
Interfere with my plans
Doubt the existence
Of this translucent layer
Will the signs of my weak 
Body disappear
...
Epileptic thoughts
Anonymous crashes
Hallucinating phases
An eternal vexation
A dizzy maze
A painful exhalation
...
Will i tend to lose my sanity
When i wake up,
Will the truth be blurted
Shall i take off the mask
And take back my knife
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Brown Avatar
November 28, 2011 at 6:33 AM
Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s contest Mystified. Love, Carol
Story Avatar
November 28, 2011 at 11:42 AM
Carol this is an honor ! thank you millions of hugs to you!
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November 26, 2011 at 2:02 PM
Congratulations on your win. I really enjoyed Reading your poem! Lori
Story Avatar
November 28, 2011 at 11:41 AM
im glad thta uve liked it :D yhank you lori! ^^
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November 23, 2011 at 11:44 PM
M.S., ;-) stopping by to wish you and everyone a happy THANKSGIVING! Also to congratulate you in my "any poem goes contest`" Have yourself a wonderful and lovely holiday. God Bless,.. p.d.
Story Avatar
November 28, 2011 at 11:39 AM
HURRAY HURRAY HURRAY! THANK YOU! =D
Story Avatar
July 18, 2011 at 6:32 AM
thank you so much guys glad to have such nice comments
Mehta Avatar
June 10, 2011 at 3:39 PM
Beautiful expressions nicely worded, deus
Amadore Avatar
June 10, 2011 at 8:50 AM
A sharply drawn piece, well worded and concretely imagined and conveyed...I enjoyed this..
Brown Avatar
June 10, 2011 at 7:09 AM
Wishing you a wonderful day and weekend too. I enjoyed reading your poetry this morning Deus. I hope your weekend is filled with love and joy and you find your soul filled with inspiration. Love, Carol
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