Out of My Coma World

Will i tend to forget
The innermost part
Of my memory
Interfere with my plans
Doubt the existence
Of this translucent layer
Will the signs of my weak 
Body disappear
...
Epileptic thoughts
Anonymous crashes
Hallucinating phases
An eternal vexation
A dizzy maze
A painful exhalation
...
Will i tend to lose my sanity
When i wake up,
Will the truth be blurted
Shall i take off the mask
And take back my knife

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 11/28/2011 6:33:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s contest Mystified. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/28/2011 11:42:00 AM
Carol this is an honor ! thank you millions of hugs to you!
Date: 11/26/2011 2:02:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. I really enjoyed Reading your poem! Lori
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Date: 11/28/2011 11:41:00 AM
im glad thta uve liked it :D yhank you lori! ^^
Date: 11/23/2011 11:44:00 PM
M.S., ;-) stopping by to wish you and everyone a happy THANKSGIVING! Also to congratulate you in my "any poem goes contest`" Have yourself a wonderful and lovely holiday. God Bless,.. p.d.
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Date: 11/28/2011 11:39:00 AM
HURRAY HURRAY HURRAY! THANK YOU! =D
Date: 7/18/2011 6:32:00 AM
thank you so much guys glad to have such nice comments
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Date: 6/10/2011 3:39:00 PM
Beautiful expressions nicely worded, deus
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Date: 6/10/2011 8:50:00 AM
A sharply drawn piece, well worded and concretely imagined and conveyed...I enjoyed this..
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Date: 6/10/2011 7:09:00 AM
Wishing you a wonderful day and weekend too. I enjoyed reading your poetry this morning Deus. I hope your weekend is filled with love and joy and you find your soul filled with inspiration. Love, Carol
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