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Out of Control

Sweat Pants Elastic waist Big Mac upon my plate Juicy burger, fries~bite me guys Up size
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015


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Date: 6/7/2015 10:52:00 PM
I love your Cinquain poem Sara. I can so relate. It is a winner.
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Date: 6/7/2015 10:31:00 PM
Sara, I wrote a cinquain poem and wanted to submit it for the contest. How do I do that. I wrote the poem on my page. Love, Charlene
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Date: 6/6/2015 7:46:00 AM
- Well done, Sara :))) - Good luck in the contest - I wish you a great weekend! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 6/6/2015 11:21:00 AM
Thanks for dropping by..I hope that your week end is wonderful..Sara
Date: 6/6/2015 1:21:00 AM
Sara. Lol, this is hilarious for the contest, Big fat 7 and thanks for visiting my thingambob poem, so many weird slang words in that era, I had fun with the slang dictionary
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 6/6/2015 7:29:00 AM
BW, I found the thingambob very humorous..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
Date: 6/5/2015 8:23:00 PM
Oh my reads like a winner to me! Light & Love Debbie
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 6/6/2015 7:28:00 AM
Debbie, I bet you knew what the term "bite me" means didn't you?..Sara
Date: 6/5/2015 7:31:00 PM
ho ho!!! I think maybe you are like me when I go to a movie and see all the snacks!!! GREAT cinquain.
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 6/6/2015 7:27:00 AM
I just looked up the term "Bite Me"..Well, I wish I had not..I did not think it meant that but was something entirely different..Whoa what have I written?..Thanks for dropping by..Sara
Date: 6/5/2015 2:57:00 PM
ha ha ha I only ever have a single hamburger and nothing else at Mcdonalds - oh i feel peckish now - thanks! Our only Mcdonalds is 15 miles away lol
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 6/5/2015 3:35:00 PM
It is a rare thing and not the meat that I eat a Big Mac now..I do eat the fish sandwich with apples or the Southern chicken sandwich..I do indulge in wild behavior sometimes ..Sara
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