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Out of Control

Sweat Pants
Elastic waist
Big Mac upon my plate
Juicy burger, fries~bite me guys
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Charlene Mccutcheon

June 7, 2015 at 10:52 PM

I love your Cinquain poem Sara. I can so relate. It is a winner.

Charlene Mccutcheon

June 7, 2015 at 10:31 PM

Sara, I wrote a cinquain poem and wanted to submit it for the contest. How do I do that. I wrote the poem on my page. Love, Charlene

Anne-Lise Andresen

June 6, 2015 at 7:46 AM

- Well done, Sara :))) - Good luck in the contest - I wish you a great weekend! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sara Kendrick

June 6, 2015 at 11:21 AM

Thanks for dropping by..I hope that your week end is wonderful..Sara

Constance La France

June 6, 2015 at 1:21 AM

Sara. Lol, this is hilarious for the contest, Big fat 7 and thanks for visiting my thingambob poem, so many weird slang words in that era, I had fun with the slang dictionary

Sara Kendrick

June 6, 2015 at 7:29 AM

BW, I found the thingambob very humorous..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Debbie Guzzi

June 5, 2015 at 8:23 PM

Oh my reads like a winner to me! Light & Love Debbie

Sara Kendrick

June 6, 2015 at 7:28 AM

Debbie, I bet you knew what the term "bite me" means didn't you?..Sara

Andrea Dietrich

June 5, 2015 at 7:31 PM

ho ho!!! I think maybe you are like me when I go to a movie and see all the snacks!!! GREAT cinquain.

Sara Kendrick

June 6, 2015 at 7:27 AM

I just looked up the term "Bite Me"..Well, I wish I had not..I did not think it meant that but was something entirely different..Whoa what have I written?..Thanks for dropping by..Sara

Jan Allison

June 5, 2015 at 2:57 PM

ha ha ha I only ever have a single hamburger and nothing else at Mcdonalds - oh i feel peckish now - thanks! Our only Mcdonalds is 15 miles away lol

Sara Kendrick

June 5, 2015 at 3:35 PM

It is a rare thing and not the meat that I eat a Big Mac now..I do eat the fish sandwich with apples or the Southern chicken sandwich..I do indulge in wild behavior sometimes ..Sara

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