Out of Blue

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Run as fast as you possibly can, my darling. Because the hounds are hot on your track. Snapping and growling may be heard. Take both hands and grasp your Achilles. Anubis was on duty of storing the vital items. Written: August 6, 2021

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 8/8/2021 8:33:00 AM

Yes, we can only stay a step ahead for a limited time. I am hoping to run a double marathon.

Sotto Poet
Date: 8/8/2021 11:51:00 AM

Absolutely true, Richard, I hope that step could save us in the long run, but I doubt it, my good friend.

Delice Arleen Skelly

Date: 8/7/2021 4:33:00 AM

I can just see Anubis guiding souls into the afterlife...Delice

Sotto Poet
Date: 8/7/2021 10:06:00 AM

You're correct, Delice; the first three verses are just a warning for that day.

Buhagiar Victor

Date: 8/7/2021 1:09:00 AM

When death decides to arrive, no hound will escape it.

Sotto Poet
Date: 8/7/2021 4:24:00 AM

Absolutely correct, Victor, nothing can stop death, you’re always uplifting and straight to the point. Have a blessed weekend