Out My Window

Out my window, I see so far,
I see people, birds, trees and grass,
I see flowers, colours and vast sky,
So many things to see, and admire.

I see a hope, new morning brings,
I feel the comfort of the breeze,
I stare at the growing glow of Sun,
And I close this window on the wall.

I open the window of my heart,
To let the feelings and desires flow,
And I carve them, and I shape them,
In a poetic way, beside my window.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Agustin Avatar
June 2, 2024 at 11:43 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
John Avatar
February 3, 2024 at 1:55 AM
Oh, windows all over our minds, our hearts. Nicely put here, Meenakshi.
Andresen Avatar
August 28, 2023 at 3:12 AM
- Beautifully written... using an open heart, Meenakshi :) - Luck in the contest :) - hugs
Raina Avatar
August 28, 2023 at 9:37 AM
Thank you!!
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